Red Hots

. My gift to him is simple Red Hot Cinnamon Sweet Hearts Hot to match his red hot ways Fiery hot man (Fiery has three syllables here..) For:Francine Roberts Contest:"Red"

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Elton Camp

Date: 2/7/2011 4:59:00 PM

Your poem revived a pleasant memory from long ago. When I was in college, my girlfriend and I (both having little money) would walk over campus and to town and talk while we shared a bag of red hots. I wish I knew what became of her and if she still likes them. I do. Elton

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/3/2011 9:21:00 AM

WOW Sara...NICE!!!!!!! good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/3/2011 8:53:00 AM

this is great Sara! I believe you will do well in the contest:) Thanks so much for your wonderful comments on "Icy Blast", they warm my heart:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2011 6:04:00 AM

thankxxx Sara for your encouragement and kind words.. always appreciate your wisdom and wonderful spirit my friend.. enjoy your day with luv ..and faith in God's Plan ...luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/3/2011 2:44:00 AM

What a hottie write, Sara :) simple yet hot! Wish you the best in the contest and praying all is well :) --nikko :)

Steven Henderson

Date: 2/2/2011 6:32:00 PM

Very hot to say the least Sara! Good luck! Steve

Elaine George

Date: 2/2/2011 3:45:00 PM

I love those candies and I love this masterful Dodoitsu, Sara, and thank you for your kind comments. Elaine.

James Fraser

Date: 2/2/2011 2:57:00 PM

Oo la la Sara, good luck in Francine's contest....)

Daver Austin

Date: 2/2/2011 8:25:00 AM

Lots of love here with a dash of Franks hot sauce. Enjoyed. Love, Dave

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/1/2011 10:53:00 PM

hmmm... really hot and nice, sara! best winning wishes to you! :) huggs,nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2011 7:54:00 PM

A super hot entry Sara.. truth always reads best and u have written a perfect piece here for the contest.. great success my dear friend with luv... awesome... and thankxx for your encouragement on my contest entry too..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/1/2011 5:25:00 PM

Wow Sara, another great write for Valentine's! Best of luck in the contest!...Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2011 3:15:00 PM

Who could ask for a better gift on Valentine's Day, Sara? Best wishes for success in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn