Sara Kendrick Poet Dodoitsu

Red Hots

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My gift to him is simple
         Red Hot Cinnamon Sweet Hearts
                         Hot to match his red hot ways
                                                   Fiery hot man




(Fiery has three syllables here..)

For:Francine Roberts
Contest:"Red"

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Elton Camp February 7, 2011 at 4:59 PM Your poem revived a pleasant memory from long ago. When I was in college, my girlfriend and I (both having little money) would walk over campus and to town and talk while we shared a bag of red hots. I wish I knew what became of her and if she still likes them. I do. Elton

Jimmy Anderson February 3, 2011 at 9:21 AM WOW Sara...NICE!!!!!!! good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Carol Fillmore February 3, 2011 at 8:53 AM this is great Sara! I believe you will do well in the contest:) Thanks so much for your wonderful comments on "Icy Blast", they warm my heart:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 3, 2011 at 6:04 AM thankxxx Sara for your encouragement and kind words.. always appreciate your wisdom and wonderful spirit my friend.. enjoy your day with luv ..and faith in God's Plan ...luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 3, 2011 at 2:44 AM What a hottie write, Sara :) simple yet hot! Wish you the best in the contest and praying all is well :) --nikko :)

Steven Henderson February 2, 2011 at 6:32 PM Very hot to say the least Sara! Good luck! Steve

Elaine George February 2, 2011 at 3:45 PM I love those candies and I love this masterful Dodoitsu, Sara, and thank you for your kind comments. Elaine.

James Fraser February 2, 2011 at 2:57 PM Oo la la Sara, good luck in Francine's contest....)

Daver Austin February 2, 2011 at 8:25 AM Lots of love here with a dash of Franks hot sauce. Enjoyed. Love, Dave

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2011 at 10:53 PM hmmm... really hot and nice, sara! best winning wishes to you! :) huggs,nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 1, 2011 at 7:54 PM A super hot entry Sara.. truth always reads best and u have written a perfect piece here for the contest.. great success my dear friend with luv... awesome... and thankxx for your encouragement on my contest entry too..

Gert W. Knop February 1, 2011 at 5:25 PM Wow Sara, another great write for Valentine's! Best of luck in the contest!...Gert

Carolyn Devonshire February 1, 2011 at 3:15 PM Who could ask for a better gift on Valentine's Day, Sara? Best wishes for success in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn