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Red Geraniums

She used second-hand water Water that had first been used to scrub vegetables or rinse the dishes And poured it over her red geraniums with loving hands Waste not, want not...was her motto In offering such hand-me-downs to her flowers They cared not For her own apron was a hand-me-down Made from a worn-out shirt,... and simply told that she had learned to cherish what life gives: even the smallest things, had value.... Her flowers seemed to know her gentle way, her tender touch... You half expected that when she turned away the flowers would leave their place to follow her, the way the kittens followed from the barn when she came up from milking the cows There may be other languages of love But these stubborn red geraniums would not die....they simply bloomed brighter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/7/2010 8:10:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:15:00 AM
Beautiful vignette..would make a great short movie that they used to show instead of ads.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/9/2009 5:30:00 PM
....Again You incorporate the peaceful lovelies of Your surroundings into another of Your heartful and wonderful stories~wherein I somehow see the Geraniums as possible meatphors towards human lives!!?:):)~Thus I see "Your Love Extended," from not only blood lines; but unto "All" lives!!!?:):)~"Absolutely Beautiful Write Carrie"~"My Love Always & Forever To 'You & Yours,' John!!!"~"Happy Easter Dear Lady!!!":):) ~
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Date: 4/9/2009 5:21:00 PM
Smile~"Beautiful & Tender Write of Sentimental Love Dear!!!":):)~"Hello Precious, Priceless & Beautiful Carrie Richards & All of Your Loves!!!":):)~I hope that Your lives have been going wonderfully for You All dear lady~And that "Your Good Friday & Easter Weekend" shall be completely blessed with joys of happiness!!!:):)....cont....
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:43:00 PM
This is beautiful, Carrie. Your words hold much wisdom. We should love and appreciate what we have. This flowing write is filled with such lovely imagery! Excellent, Carrie. I see I have much to catch up on! Thank you for your kind words! Love, Robin
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:36:00 AM
Carrie, the first thought that struck me as I started on this poem, after reading everyone's reaction, was the love your poetry spreads throughout the soup, trully a gift to us all! your expressions and beautiful conclusions are wonderful! thanks for reading my work! jmg
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:22:00 AM
What a fabulous piece of free verse... people today are pack rats, but to no purpose; they simply hoard. In past generations everything was used, and had a meaning. Well done Carrie! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:13:00 AM
Thanks for asking, Shar....this was actually my Grandmother I was writing about...but it could apply to my mother as well (except for the milking cows part)...My mom had chickens to feed but no cows, but my gram had the whole farm.
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:05:00 AM
Oh Carrie, is this about your mom? So many images of my mom come to mind in reading this tender and nostalgic poem. Such a heartfelt tribute that speaks of the powerful qualities of deep love and appreciation, both from the poet and whom she is writing about. That the flowers would leave their place to follow her, is a stunning image and a beautiful thought to process. So wonderful to read. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/9/2009 10:47:00 AM
Carrie, you have written a favorite for me, full of lyrical passion and tenderness ... a beautiful trophy from among the gems of modern writing. Love always
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Date: 4/9/2009 8:39:00 AM
Carrie you outdid yourself on this one, simply beautiful. It reminds me so much of my Aunt Eunice. One of the finest ladies that ever walked the earth. She never wasted nothing, when bread became stale, we were treated to her famous bread pudding, fond memories. Thank you and God Bless you, Ron
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Date: 4/9/2009 8:30:00 AM
Oh to be your red geraniums, so much tenderness and love....This is your always image, Carrie. Love, daver
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:25:00 AM
Carrie I simply love your poetry--
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Date: 4/9/2009 4:42:00 AM
Wonderfully done my friend..I love you drew me into this painting...the ending lines brings this home in a great way.
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Date: 4/9/2009 3:51:00 AM
My mom loves geraniums and ususally I at least plant a couple just because she does. This is precious Carrie and it touches my heart.
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:56:00 AM
You have speciality of this genre.Perhaps an anthology to come ? Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Easter blessings to you & yours
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:54:00 AM
What lovely memories you share with us, I too like Geraniums but I wish we had a warmer climate so they would stay longer. Have a blessed Easter. Leon
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Date: 4/8/2009 8:23:00 PM
I can see those geraniums and smell their strange odour, that only geraniums have - they are a kitchen windowsill plant and they do thrive with love.. Thanks for your comment Carrie. Love reading your poems.
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Date: 4/8/2009 7:20:00 PM
Such a tender image of a woman who appreciate the true values in life, never worrying about what she didn't have, simply rejoicing in all the beauty that came her way. This is one of my favorites now, Carrie. Thank you for sharing it! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/8/2009 7:16:00 PM
Carrie this poem reminds me so much of my Grandmother that it brought tears to my eyes - I have missed being on the site and reading everyones poetry it certainly is a huge part of my life - YF4L, God Bless, MJ
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