Red Fred

Fred heard his new crush loved men with red hair And went next door to a salon called Flare Now dyed red for his new date Valentine's Day he couldn't wait Until the back of his head was left bare

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/11/2024 3:43:00 PM

Oh no! I hope he didn't pay premium for that service! LOL. Cute one Tania. :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/12/2024 3:44:00 AM

Linda, thank you.

Valsa George

Date: 1/18/2024 6:03:00 AM

Fred is all red except at the back of his head. Chemical dyes can leave one completely bald. Fortunately he was not totally bald on his much anticipated date. Quite hilarious Tania !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2024 4:11:00 PM

Very funny, Tania. I imagine it has actually happened to some guys. One time my hair was so overdyed blonde that I was washing it one day and it began crumbling in my fingers, so I had to chop it off until my roots grew back. The hair stylist I was seeing then would put the bleach straight from the bottle onto my hair Good grief

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/16/2024 4:16:00 PM

Andrea, thank you, what a horrible hair experience you endured!

Joseph May

Date: 1/15/2024 11:50:00 AM

Lol, Now Fred is seeing red.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2024 12:00:00 PM

Joseph, thanks for your visit.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/15/2024 8:56:00 AM

Poor Fred should have avoided red. This is a fun one.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2024 12:00:00 PM

Richard, thank you.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/15/2024 8:51:00 AM

Cute one. Love it. God bless you. love, Gina

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2024 12:00:00 PM

Gina, thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/15/2024 2:03:00 AM

Loved it. He'll lose all his hair.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2024 4:17:00 AM

Victor, thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2024 5:30:00 PM

lol Tania:-) hugs jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2024 4:17:00 AM

Jan, thank you, hugs.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2024 6:43:00 AM

Ha!! Ha!! I am now wondering does she like men with shaved heads. I have read your work and enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing, using your creative muse. Sara K

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/14/2024 6:59:00 AM

Sara, thank you.