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scarlet red lipstick smeared over your shirt collar silence can’t mask lies Red Contest Sponsored By Mystic Rose 05~29~17

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Bl Devnath

Date: 6/1/2017 9:22:00 AM

Well done my dear lovely friend. A hided open script beautifully done. Amazing... Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2017 11:20:00 AM

Thanks so much Bl:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 5/30/2017 7:57:00 AM

No man can mask his sins forever. Great last line, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2017 8:00:00 AM

Thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

Just James

Date: 5/30/2017 6:14:00 AM

Seductively well done!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2017 7:03:00 AM

Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 5/30/2017 4:48:00 AM

Brilliant Senryu Jan, this is always a prank, well that's my excuse honestly, great poem, good luck on contest. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2017 5:08:00 AM

lol Roy. I'm not sure Vienna will like it but I just go with the flow of my pen:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2017 4:57:00 PM

And red lipstick for SURE cannot mask it!! Soupie!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2017 4:57:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/29/2017 3:53:00 PM

Hello Miss Jan. Good Afternoon. Well now. How true your words are. Also true is your form voice and tone. All of it. Yes, you captured red. Good luck with the contest. I loved your incorporation and expression of scarlet. Well done entirely.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2017 3:54:00 PM

I think I would see red if I experienced this deception Lisa!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/29/2017 2:28:00 PM

:)...Oh He can't say that's a strawberry stain from strawberry picking... :)Caught red handed.ha..Loved this dear..I wish it on nobody in reality.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2017 2:30:00 PM

ha ha ha that is a good one but I am sure that excuse wouldn't wash either Charma - they may say nothing but the eyes cannot hide the lies:-( hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/29/2017 1:59:00 PM

I dislike cheats Jan. Hope he was thrown out.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2017 2:06:00 PM

Unfortunately we come across many forms of dishonesty and betrayal during our lifetime Tim - I know I have had my fair share especially over the last 2 years but I am out of my life forever now:-( The video clip inspired this poem and it fitted the red theme so well:-) Hugs Jan xx