Red Dawn

The fact that I feel like writing again. Yes, feeling much better! Here’s a limerick: RED DAWN Fair wind, this lass, Sally, set sail abroad. With her, in red dawn, like lobster - her Claude. A torrent did steer and kicked at his rear. So quickly the tides turned against this broad. 9/22/2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/26/2022 4:58:00 PM

LOL, good Limerick, Kim. Glad you're back at it again, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2022 6:46:00 PM

Thanks…lol! Sometimes we must lighten the mood! :)

Valsa George

Date: 9/22/2022 8:07:00 PM

Hi Kim, glad to know that you are feeling better and are in a mood to write humorous limericks !

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2022 6:52:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa! Hugs ~ Kim

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/22/2022 7:46:00 PM

My, My. 'This broad.' Tsk. Tsk. Whatever will the P.C. Police think, Kim?! lol. About time someone took a walk down 'Broadway again.' ~ Parker Place

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2022 6:54:00 AM

The PC police will have to follow me through the narrow way. I don’t think they will fit through the eye of the camel. Meanwhile that broad makes an escape. ;)

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/22/2022 2:38:00 PM

:))Love it! Very witty. So happy you feel like writing. Blessings! I was away for awhile, working on novel, but got lonesome for poetry~ so here I am for a bit.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2022 5:17:00 PM

Glad you decided to visit, Joe! Happy writing of your novel! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/22/2022 1:03:00 PM

Glad you're feeling better. Lovely limerick. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2022 1:21:00 PM

Thanks! Hugs ~ Kim