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Rebirth

Sun nestled on the horizon Casting its rays upward Giving the belly of the Clouds The glorious light hot pink color Damp, cool giving sun Competition for the day Clouds seem to encase The sun closing in on it Saying no, today we Rule, don't give your light We will water the earth So the earth can be restored Those heavenly rain showers Bring their blessings Giving all living on the earth Hope of renewal and rebirth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/11/2009 1:33:00 PM
Beautiful images drifting through this poem Sara>>James
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Date: 9/11/2009 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful write here, Sara. Wish we had more rain here in Eugene but the next 2 days are supposed to be in the 90's again ... ugh ...
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Date: 9/11/2009 8:29:00 AM
Excellent poem, keep writing.
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:16:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the message of renewal and rebirth on this day of remembrance - 9/11. As always your poems inspire. All the best, Krista
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:14:00 AM
what a wonderful didactic. I love the flow of words and the creativity you possess. keep writing Sara. you are a great inspiration at the soup. love, Adeleke
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:47:00 AM
This is lovely, Sara. The life giving rain is a "rebirth", everything so fresh and new in it's aftermath. Thank you for your kind words and for sharing! Love, Robin
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