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Crumbling Rhyme
Created by Constance La France, an eight line, rhyming poem that follows this pattern;

line 1- indent 14 spaces -  4 syllables - A
line 2- indent   8 spaces -  8 syllables-  B 
line 3- indent   6 spaces - 10 syllables- A 
line 4- indent   8 spaces-    6 syllables- B
line 5- indent   2 spaces-  12 syllables- C
line 6- indent   2 spaces - 12 syllables- C
line 7- indent   4 spaces-    8 syllables- C
line 8-indent    2 spaces-  12 syllables- A 

As your heart breaks fake facades crumble into dust; but you're ready to forgive past mistakes, and reestablish trust. Awash with emotional tides and acid tears, time has slowly dissolved the foundation of your fears. And you recall the happy years, determined to salvage love, whatever it takes. (Crumbling Rhyme) 06,10,2019

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Date: 6/30/2019 6:36:00 PM
Emile congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for my delay in visiting ~
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/1/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Constance, I enjoy your contest they excite my muse, and I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/30/2019 6:27:00 PM
I know from personal experience how difficult it is to trust again after being betrayed ... maybe in time it will happen but the pain of deceit runs so deep. well penned Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/1/2019 7:24:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/25/2019 9:35:00 PM
Your passionate pen never fails you, Emile. A powerful emotional display. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/26/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/25/2019 11:54:00 AM
Love this, Emile. I thought this challenge brought forth many beautiful poems from the members here. Congrats on your win. Going to WA in an hour!! Hope to see you soon
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2019 3:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Andrea, I wish you all the best my friend, Emile.

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