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Reading the Future

The lass came to consult in the darkening gloaming, Shyly she knocked on the frosted window Of the gypsy’s cabin. She was sick with trepidation, As she was ushered into the musty decrepit room. The crystal globe on the table seemed opaque. Unpredictable how things came fearsomely to a head. The globe cleared momentarily and became luminous. This was followed by intimidating hums and aha, As if all has been quickly but ominously revealed. The gypsy fortune teller’s voice was full of pathos, “I see a young valiant man guiding you into a shop. Armed men entered to steal what they could. Someone fired a shot. The young man protected her. He died on the spot.” All this she saw in the globe. The young lass vowed she’d never enter any shop, But the gypsy assured her that she would do so. The future cannot in any way be changed. It was immutable. The lass left; sure, she would be melancholy forevermore. The gypsy gathered her ill-gotten money and wondered How the young ones, so ready with money, were so gullible.

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Date: 6/25/2023 12:50:00 PM
The poor girl, she was taken. There are many con artists in our world, especially today. One must remember that our decisions can indeed make a difference in what the future brings. Well-done.
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Date: 6/10/2023 1:57:00 PM
An intriguing story, Victor. So many fall into the trap because of their needs, whether need to be led, sorrow, depression etc ... I enjoyed the read today. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Bill
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Date: 6/7/2023 3:11:00 AM
Victor Victor Victor. Hello. Once again we are all in the scene looking on. Your words have truth because no one can know the future even with five minutes from now other that God himself. I believe there are many scammers out there ready to take money from people young or old who are vulnerable or lost. Well done Victor. Have a beautiful and peaceful day. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)
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Date: 6/6/2023 9:59:00 PM
Oh yeah! How can one think that man can know his future?? Brilliant, Victor:)
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Date: 6/6/2023 1:25:00 PM
An enjoyable read Victor, makes you wonder is there anything in it. Tom
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Date: 6/6/2023 12:54:00 PM
LOL! Yes, the future is you’re out of money, you big dummy. Love this! I always turn my face away from those places as the bible quite clearly tells us not to. Listen to the Lord only and you can’t go wrong but many are fooled by their grief, etc.. God bless you, sweet friend! You always tell great stories.
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Date: 6/6/2023 11:00:00 AM
Let's hope she was only gullible. I wonder if any of these psychics ever get it right?? You never know, someone might have a talent for it. Cool story.
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Date: 6/6/2023 10:58:00 AM
An engrossing tale, with an ending that surprises and delights. I was happy to know that the tragic prediction, at least, would never come to pass. Great writing, Victor.
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Date: 6/6/2023 10:41:00 AM
Victor, your poem is truly insightful and provided me with delightful reading. It serves as a subtle cautionary tale for those who may be ensnared by the wiles of clairvoyants and fortune tellers.
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Date: 6/6/2023 6:43:00 AM
People still flock to them oblivious to the deception, Very nicely penned Victor
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Date: 6/6/2023 5:36:00 AM
Great story telling as always, Victor.
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Date: 6/6/2023 4:58:00 AM
A hidden warning to all who fall into the trap laid by clairvoyants and fortune tellers. It all sounds so real, dear victordv
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Date: 6/6/2023 4:27:00 AM
Victor, I love this!! your ending is so spot on! Such entertaining reading for me this morning!! Happy Tuesday!!
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Date: 6/6/2023 3:38:00 AM
Finally, a good ending in one(in all the poems on here that I have read). I wonder if she ever got her engagement ring. I have noticed that in a house in another town not far from my home a fortune teller had had out a sign, but now they are tearing out carpet, flooring, etc. at the house and the sign is gone. I guess she is gone with her sign. Thanks for sharing this poem with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 6/6/2023 1:55:00 AM
- She squandered the money on nonsense... gullible or stupid (?) - An excellet write as always, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 6/6/2023 1:53:00 AM
Ha ha ha... That's a great ending!!! I loved this story and the narration... You are a great story teller!!!
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Date: 6/5/2023 11:38:00 PM
Well talking about surprise endings, this one is marvelous. It pleased me. I smiled. Thank you.
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