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Gothic Horror: A Brief History of Carnival Fortune Tellers

The carnival rolls in on trailers with scars, and among them is a reader of stars. She can read your heart or so it seems, can see within the woman of your dreams. Can see past all your sorrow like a knife, to tell you that peace will enter your life. Those stories of childhood that you acted out, where your wish was to be a princess no doubt. Well, a lovey future for you she can foresee, she says there is a prince for someone just like me. _______________________ September 7, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Reader of Stars Copyright Protected, ID 20-1284-064-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Collaboration Constance La France and Line Gauthier Written for the contest, MAX 12 LINES - poem-inspired prompt sponsor, Line Gauthier

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/15/2020 8:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I "Love" your write and picture. As a kid I remember the carnival rolling into town for a few days. Enjoy your win................

Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2020 8:29:00 AM

Paula, thanks for the congratulations and compliment, appreciate _Constance

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/13/2020 10:07:00 PM

well-done, an ace of a piece inspired by Line, written by Constance. Kudos to you both, a number one piece.

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2020 9:58:00 AM

Reason, thank your for the compliment , appreciate _Constance

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/12/2020 2:38:00 PM

Excellent collaboration with Line, Constance. Congratulations on your win. Belle

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2020 9:59:00 AM

Belle, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

John Watt

Date: 9/12/2020 9:50:00 AM

You nailed it, Constance. Beautiful collaboration with Line's prompts. Congrats on your #1, I think this is just what she was looking for. ~ John

Constance La France
Date: 9/12/2020 9:51:00 AM

John, thank you so much for the compliment and for the congrats, appreciate _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 9/12/2020 8:19:00 AM

Great verse using Line's unfinished verse, Constance. Congratulations on your collaboration win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 9/12/2020 9:50:00 AM

Eve, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for the compliment and congratulations _Constance