Razorback Hoghunt (Ole Brownie P2)

Meat in my smokehouse a bit light,
With the weather about right,
One morning at first light,
I headed to buzzard roost hollow,
A leash on Brownie’s collar,

But Brownie went crazy as a goose,
When I turn him loose,
My worse fear, I could hear,
Him chasing a deer,
Out of pope county, was clear,

Anyhow, now, down in the pope county wild woods,
Seated on an Arkansas hollow log,
With my finger on a trigger, and my eye on a hog,
I pulled that trigger, and the bullet went zip,
I jumped on that hog, with all my grip,
Though I knew I had missed, 
I couldn’t resist,

Now as my grip would slip.
The hog would rip,
Tusk 8 inches long,
Like ice tongs,
Would chomp and rip,
As the battle begin to tip,
Hog getting the best of a bad situation,
Sure wish my dog hadn’t taken, his deer vacation,

At about the time,
I thought it was, the end of the line,
I heard Brownie coming,
Man, that dog was running,

He had heard the fight,
Was coming back, to claim his right,
Old Johnny Cash, in the boy named Sue,
Ain’t shown my dog and me, nothing new,

Blood guts and hair, rose up in the air,
When ole Brownie took hold, this fight ain’t fair,
Didn’t take no hour,
Untill we were back in our own lair,

We were saying a prayer, within the hour,
I was seated in a chair,
At my kitchen table,
Razorback meat, the label,
Ole Brownie, proving himself to be, very able,
To sit under my table,
For he’s my mean hooooog,
DOG!!!

Dedication: "MoonBee Canady" An outstanding poet of light poetry, as far as I am concerned.
I certainly enjoy reading your light poetry, as well as the other types you write. You go girl,
I hope you like these poems! Godly love, Sincerely Moses

9-27-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/1/2009 1:02:00 PM
Greetings John: I really liked this poem. The line about Johnny Cash was awesome. Great job. yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 10/16/2009 10:04:00 AM
"Old Johnny Cash, in the boy named Sue" i love these lines, mi daddy is a big fanny of Johnny Cash lol and the boy names sue, hell i grew up with that song lol. i liked this one very much. thank you for pointing it out and thank you for you compliments. =) xo Rain
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Date: 10/12/2009 2:08:00 PM
John, this my kind of poem, one that tells a great story...100 stars in my book...Thanks for your words on Dear Diary, it has saved my hide more than a few times..Danny
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Date: 10/10/2009 3:28:00 PM
I like this poem, Moses. NO I LOVE this poem. You are so lucky to have that mean Polk County dog. He definitely proved himself on that day. And I hope you were spared some pain. God bless you "Hog Hunting Jesus Loving Man." ...and I know that He will. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/4/2009 3:04:00 PM
John, i can tell by your writing you get a massive buzz from it, awesome write >> James
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Date: 10/4/2009 2:09:00 PM
sounds like that meal was worth eatin! good ole' dog that Brownie!... jim
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Date: 10/4/2009 1:50:00 PM
This was great I really enjoyed it but kinda scary my husband and son go hog hunting and thier stories scare me to.Thanks so much Moses for those wonderful comments on my poems.Teresa
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Date: 10/4/2009 9:38:00 AM
Awesome write, Moses! What a wonderful story-poem you have penned! There is something so special about the faithfulness of mans best friend. A delightful read and wonderful dedication! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/4/2009 8:24:00 AM
Love the story of how Brownie left his "deer vacation" when he sensed you needed help. It must have taken a lot of courage for you to take such a hog. (Audition for "Survivor." I think you've got the stuff to win! And I, too, enjoy MoonBee's writes very much! Awesome to end the tale with fresh smoked pork on the table and Browne waiting beneath for a much-deserved handout. Great work, Moses! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/3/2009 12:50:00 PM
Great country-boy write my friend. Parts I & II both! I live in central MS. and they are now considered a pest down here. As far as I know it is open season year-round. The only law is you can't bait them. Also I truly appreciate your comments on my stuff as well - Tim
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Date: 10/3/2009 5:43:00 AM
your mean hog dog is an excellent dog,OLE Brownie the dog--a pleasure to read--Charma
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Date: 10/2/2009 9:00:00 PM
I read both your poems about Old Brownie early this morning at work and couldn't comment at the time. I think they are both great! I have memories of a dog that was "almost as mean" lol. Thanks for the comment on "Cornucopia"...A friend...Marty
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Date: 10/2/2009 8:51:00 PM
LOVED IT ... LOVED IT ... LOVED IT ... Hog-Hunting Huh .... Aww Honey ... You shouldn't Have (he he) This Kind of Poem, was exactly what I needed Right Now, Moses... And A Dedication to me from A Man and His Dog (Man's Best Friend) ... Hey, I'm Honored, Truly... You Know, when I read the first Part ... I wondered if y'all caught anything (or would it catch Y'all (smile) Going Into My Fav's Moses ... Truly Thank You ... MoonBee
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Date: 10/2/2009 7:55:00 PM
Awesome story, my friend. Feel Like I know that ther dooog. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/2/2009 5:28:00 PM
This is delightfully funny and serious at the same time. Thanks for your comments on mine and you are right on about incomprehensible being about God. The more I know the more I know that I don't know. Keep writing. Sara
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