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Raw Passion

Golden hair, sultry look Curvy hips, she shook His breath, she took... Steady, pal, by the book: Come on up, honey, to my nook ~ Too bad she couldn't cook August 29, 2019 Writing Challenge 4, August 2019 - Six Lines Sponsor: Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode

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Constance La France
Date: 9/3/2019 3:37:00 PM
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Gershon, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this fine and fun monorhyme poem, sometimes cooking is not that important !
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2019 6:27:00 PM
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Yet in this case, cooking was very important! :) gw
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2019 5:32:00 PM
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dropping back with my congrats GW:-) hugs jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2019 6:14:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Jan! :) gw
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2019 12:35:00 PM
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- What a shame ... she couldn't cook :)) - Congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2019 6:10:00 PM
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Ha, ha. What good are all those curves after a while?! Thanks, Anne-Lise. :) gw
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/2/2019 11:15:00 AM
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Back to congratulate you on your lovely win!;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2019 6:08:00 PM
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Thank you for noticing, Brenda. Appreciated. :) gw
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/2/2019 10:50:00 AM
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I certainly hope she had other talents. Nicely penned, Gershon, congrats on your win. John
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2019 6:11:00 PM
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Needed to grade her cooking 'on the curve.' Thanks, John! ~ Gershon
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Arturo Michael
Date: 9/1/2019 3:19:00 AM
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I like this...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2019 10:47:00 AM
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And it likes you too! Thanks, Arturo. ~ gw
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/30/2019 10:46:00 PM
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G'day Gershon … certainly brought a smile to my dial - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2019 10:47:00 AM
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Glad you liked it, and thanks for the interesting phrase, 'a smile to my dial.' Best wishes, gw
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/29/2019 7:16:00 PM
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Lol Gershwin this was so fun to read! ;) it just rolled off the tongue!;) loved it and made me smile;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/29/2019 8:37:00 PM
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Glad to hear it, and thank you so much for the feedback, Brenda. :) gw
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2019 4:47:00 PM
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what a fun poem and there's always take aways lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/29/2019 6:48:00 PM
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Thanks, Jan. Glad you got a chuckle out of this one. :) gw

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