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Raven Is Dead

I dreamt of her again last night. In my dream she was not dead. She stood there in the fading light But not one word she said. She did not answer when I called. She was watching the ravens in flight Circling over the foggy graveyard. It was such a heartwrenching sight. I called and called but she did not hear. She did not know I was there. Then she faded before my eyes, Vanishing into thin air. I dreamt of Raven again last night, Awakening with tears clouding my sight. Francine Roberts 13/01/2011 for Constance's contest "Among the Dead"

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Date: 2/24/2011 11:25:00 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:05:00 AM
Many congratulations Francine on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win with this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:32:00 PM
beautiful write!Congrats on your big win Francine!
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:23:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Francine! Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:58:00 AM
So glad to see your poem rank high, Francine! Congratulations, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:43:00 AM
With just the right rhymes making this a very easy poem to read. Nicely done, enjoyed
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:29:00 AM
just piercing, francine... fine CHEERS for the win..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:11:00 AM
Sensational, Francine. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 8:23:00 PM
This is an amazing dream penned in a poem. many congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:28:00 PM
I love how you made this a dream!! Well done, Francine!! Congratulations on your well deserved win! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:52:00 PM
Very lovely Francine. Congratulations on your big no. 2. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:46:00 PM
Jolly good show Francine, Congratulations on your honored second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Constance, Francine
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:15:00 PM
As I expected, you won in the contest with this entry. Good going, Francine.
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your super 2nd Place win n the "Among the Dead" Contest..well deserving win. Annalise
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your second place win in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/15/2011 3:32:00 PM
You have a formidable entry for the contest here. This write will garner a lot of attention.
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Date: 1/15/2011 2:10:00 PM
I love it Francine, so there's a little Dark streak in you also. Ooo I would love to read more of this from you. Double smiles for this beauty. Good luck in the contest....:):)
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Date: 1/15/2011 1:46:00 AM
a sullen yet magical tour arresting my senses, francine... errr, do i really want to sleep later?? awesome write that would do well in the contest.. i like, like! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 1/14/2011 11:41:00 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your amazing write Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:36:00 AM
A wonderful entry to this challenge....I'm having a hard time knowing how to even begin....you did a terrific job!! :)
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Date: 1/14/2011 6:22:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 1/14/2011 3:18:00 AM
This is so wonderful Francine, an excellent choice of poetic form, matched with a superb penned poem. good luck with this. Harry
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