Raven Is Dead

I dreamt of her again last night.
In my dream she was not dead.
She stood there in the fading light
But not one word she said.

She did not answer when I called.
She was watching the ravens in flight
Circling over the foggy graveyard.
It was such a heartwrenching sight.

I called and called but she did not hear.
She did not know I was there.
Then she faded before my eyes,
Vanishing into thin air.

I dreamt of Raven again last night,
Awakening with tears clouding my sight.






Francine Roberts   13/01/2011
for Constance's contest "Among the Dead"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:25 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Francine. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Many congratulations Francine on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Muzzey Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 7:32 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win with this wonderful write. Caryl
Poet Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:32 PM
beautiful write!Congrats on your big win Francine!
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Conway Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Francine! Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~
Devonshire Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:58 AM
So glad to see your poem rank high, Francine! Congratulations, Love, Carolyn
Bagnall Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:43 AM
With just the right rhymes making this a very easy poem to read. Nicely done, enjoyed
Onclaud Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:29 AM
just piercing, francine... fine CHEERS for the win..:) huggs, nette
George   Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 12:11 AM
Sensational, Francine. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Mannan Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 8:23 PM
This is an amazing dream penned in a poem. many congratulations.
Richards Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:28 PM
I love how you made this a dream!! Well done, Francine!! Congratulations on your well deserved win! ~ love, Carrie
Johnson Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:52 PM
Very lovely Francine. Congratulations on your big no. 2. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:46 PM
Jolly good show Francine, Congratulations on your honored second place. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Constance, Francine
Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:15 PM
As I expected, you won in the contest with this entry. Good going, Francine.
Haick Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:53 PM
Congratulations on your super 2nd Place win n the "Among the Dead" Contest..well deserving win. Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Congrats Francine on your second place win in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
Pettit Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 3:32 PM
You have a formidable entry for the contest here. This write will garner a lot of attention.
Fraser Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 2:10 PM
I love it Francine, so there's a little Dark streak in you also. Ooo I would love to read more of this from you. Double smiles for this beauty. Good luck in the contest....:):)
Onclaud Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 1:46 AM
a sullen yet magical tour arresting my senses, francine... errr, do i really want to sleep later?? awesome write that would do well in the contest.. i like, like! :) hugggs, nette
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 11:41 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your amazing write Francine. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 8:36 AM
A wonderful entry to this challenge....I'm having a hard time knowing how to even begin....you did a terrific job!! :)
La France Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
Horsman Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 3:18 AM
This is so wonderful Francine, an excellent choice of poetic form, matched with a superb penned poem. good luck with this. Harry
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