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Random Thoughts 50 Haiku--Tanka--Haiku

5,7,5----5,7,5,7,7----5,7,5 For Linda Marie's Haiku--Tanka--Haiku contest.... Love for poetry, savvy. This identity loves controversy Football and women, conversation, love-making. R & B, Reggae, inspired meditation, Four Tops, The Temptations Taking vacations, road trips across this nation.. Next stop, the ocean!!! Jared Pickett 915/2010 Asavvy1

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Skat A

Date: 3/5/2014 4:55:00 PM

You have a random way of owning your own style and words. Love it ~ SKAT

Constance La France

Date: 1/7/2011 6:05:00 AM

"All" of them were sensational, well done~~

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/16/2010 11:26:00 AM

i can dig it. johnh loving iii

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2010 5:58:00 AM

Good luck in the contest..Reads like a sure winner..Sara

Jamecia Buggs

Date: 12/4/2010 5:18:00 PM

Great write.Good luck on contest.Looks like a winner to me : ).Love,jamecia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/7/2010 8:44:00 AM

thankxxx for all your kudos in your comment Jared my sweet... luv... u and I do think alike in lots of things.. hhhmmmmm...looking forward to your next contest to astound u luv... it just gets better and better ... never dull or boring.. exiting all the time.. my old man can't keep up..need a whip now..hahahahahaha..are we still talking poetry? enjoy your Broncos today unless they have a bye week...luv.. GO GIANTS...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/23/2010 6:37:00 PM

Soup mail in a moment, Jared.

Mike Butler

Date: 9/23/2010 4:49:00 PM

Thanks for the HM in the Pantoum contest. Cool poem! Take care, -Mike

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/23/2010 9:21:00 AM

Appreciate the HM in your Pantoum contest..luv... brownie points are better but I understand... gave it my heart and soul ... mailed your package luv so let me know when u receive please... looking forward to your next contest.... enjoy your birthday..and do EVERYTHING the "Sweetheart" would do... know what I mean?????? luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations Jared on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Harvest Of Happiness". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:14:00 PM

A good way to play it, Jared. Congrats on your fine win. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 11:33:00 AM

nice one, congrats on your win in the contest

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/20/2010 9:09:00 AM

Nice write, Jared. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Date: 9/19/2010 8:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win sweetie. This is a wonderful poem. You're still my favorite poet. ILY....Love Scarlett

Wayne Sapp

Date: 9/19/2010 7:47:00 PM

Congrats Jared! Good stuff!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/19/2010 2:43:00 PM

enjoyed reading today and congrats on the big win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2010 4:26:00 AM

Congratulation for this winner in the contest, Jared

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/19/2010 12:23:00 AM

Congrats Jared on your first place win in my Harvest of Happiness contest.. with this wonderful write ..so expressive and full of emotion... please forward me your mailing address via soup mail so I will be able to mail u your $50.00 visa gift card ...thankxxx for supporting my contests ..with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2010 5:56:00 AM

Enjoy your Haiku and Tanka writes..I would love to get that road trip across the nation..Maybe by internet..Sara

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/17/2010 8:10:00 PM

Haven't done much reggae lately. I need to catch up on the modern movement. Good poem. Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/16/2010 10:20:00 AM

A wonderful entry to the sweetheart's contest, Good luck. Jared

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/16/2010 10:13:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jared. Hope you have a wonderful day. A winner for sure. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 1:53:00 PM

Nicely done, Jared. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 12:51:00 PM

thankxxx for supporting my contest oh ASavvy 1 and good luck Mr. J.. this is wonderful... u got all the things I LUV to do as well... ah u know the "Sweetheart" so well ... appreciate the charming entry..luv..