Random Thoughts **50** Haiku--Tanka--Haiku

5,7,5----5,7,5,7,7----5,7,5
For Linda Marie's Haiku--Tanka--Haiku contest....

Love for poetry,
savvy. This identity
loves controversy

Football and women,
conversation, love-making.
R & B, Reggae,
inspired meditation,
Four Tops, The Temptations

Taking vacations,
road trips across this nation..
Next stop, the ocean!!!


Jared Pickett
915/2010
Asavvy1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/5/2014 4:55:00 PM
You have a random way of owning your own style and words. Love it ~ SKAT
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Date: 1/7/2011 6:05:00 AM
"All" of them were sensational, well done~~
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Date: 12/16/2010 11:26:00 AM
i can dig it. johnh loving iii
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Date: 12/10/2010 5:58:00 AM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a sure winner..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2010 5:18:00 PM
Great write.Good luck on contest.Looks like a winner to me : ).Love,jamecia
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:44:00 AM
thankxxx for all your kudos in your comment Jared my sweet... luv... u and I do think alike in lots of things.. hhhmmmmm...looking forward to your next contest to astound u luv... it just gets better and better ... never dull or boring.. exiting all the time.. my old man can't keep up..need a whip now..hahahahahaha..are we still talking poetry? enjoy your Broncos today unless they have a bye week...luv.. GO GIANTS...
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Date: 9/23/2010 6:37:00 PM
Soup mail in a moment, Jared.
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Date: 9/23/2010 4:49:00 PM
Thanks for the HM in the Pantoum contest. Cool poem! Take care, -Mike
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:21:00 AM
Appreciate the HM in your Pantoum contest..luv... brownie points are better but I understand... gave it my heart and soul ... mailed your package luv so let me know when u receive please... looking forward to your next contest.... enjoy your birthday..and do EVERYTHING the "Sweetheart" would do... know what I mean?????? luv..
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Date: 9/21/2010 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations Jared on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Harvest Of Happiness". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:14:00 PM
A good way to play it, Jared. Congrats on your fine win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:33:00 AM
nice one, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/20/2010 9:09:00 AM
Nice write, Jared. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 9/19/2010 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win sweetie. This is a wonderful poem. You're still my favorite poet. ILY....Love Scarlett
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Date: 9/19/2010 7:47:00 PM
Congrats Jared! Good stuff!
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Date: 9/19/2010 2:43:00 PM
enjoyed reading today and congrats on the big win!
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Date: 9/19/2010 4:26:00 AM
Congratulation for this winner in the contest, Jared
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Date: 9/19/2010 12:23:00 AM
Congrats Jared on your first place win in my Harvest of Happiness contest.. with this wonderful write ..so expressive and full of emotion... please forward me your mailing address via soup mail so I will be able to mail u your $50.00 visa gift card ...thankxxx for supporting my contests ..with luv..
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Date: 9/18/2010 5:56:00 AM
Enjoy your Haiku and Tanka writes..I would love to get that road trip across the nation..Maybe by internet..Sara
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Date: 9/17/2010 8:10:00 PM
Haven't done much reggae lately. I need to catch up on the modern movement. Good poem. Charles
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Date: 9/16/2010 10:20:00 AM
A wonderful entry to the sweetheart's contest, Good luck. Jared
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Date: 9/16/2010 10:13:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jared. Hope you have a wonderful day. A winner for sure. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2010 1:53:00 PM
Nicely done, Jared. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/15/2010 12:51:00 PM
thankxxx for supporting my contest oh ASavvy 1 and good luck Mr. J.. this is wonderful... u got all the things I LUV to do as well... ah u know the "Sweetheart" so well ... appreciate the charming entry..luv..
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