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a thought of beauty scared away by negative thought is easily bought as if given free only to put on hold the bold a thought so beautiful an angels breathe could carry it across time in a gentle rain shower all living things could then feel its beauty and be one with this beauty which might strive to be alive to share the air with all that lives the beauty says, “I’ve seen things eyes have never seen more beautiful than a rainbow in a waterfall I tell you of things I’ve heard melodies so pure as to melt the strings of a harp while transcending the harpist and audience to states of mind and emotion never before visited open your minds and allow the essence of life to dilute the sin nature of physical existence imagine the soul as it reveals itself beyond the limitations of the body be your soul end the struggle accept the oneness of being you are a part of all that is all that surrounds you you also surround blend in let your existence be noted by your extraordinaire ability to be congruent with all that is alive with all that that is you may become aware that the best of you is actually the rest of you

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Silent One

Date: 1/31/2024 12:21:00 PM

An excellent poem my friend and a great thought process, if only everyone felt like this and followed their religion how they should.. sadly they do not...

Bill Baker
Date: 1/31/2024 9:55:00 PM

I'm not as active in formal religion anymore, but I still believe what resonates with my heart and soul. Thanks for always offering positive and encouraging comments, Silent One. I'm learning a lot from you and your well-written poetry. Write On, my friend! Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/31/2024 6:23:00 AM

Even your random thoughts enlighten, my friend: blend in let your existence be noted by your extraordinaire ability to be congruent with all that is alive with all that that is--reaching the depths, Bill!

Bill Baker
Date: 1/31/2024 9:52:00 PM

Thank you, my dear friend, Vijay. Your words are very encouraging. I'm still learning and trying to write better poetry, but sometimes it just wants out without much form. Have a great week! Bill

Ink Empress

Date: 1/31/2024 2:00:00 AM

Dear bill, how profound is this, the way youv delivered your thoughts is so very creative and gets the readers to feel and see through what you are describing in such eloquence. I love so many lines in this, especially “ melodies so pure as to melt the strings of a harp while transcending the harpist and audience” thats a brilliant line and i love the line about rainbows in waterfalls! How clever and artistic and what a meaningful write this is. Has a philosophical touch to it too. FAVE!

Bill Baker
Date: 1/31/2024 9:49:00 PM

Thank you for understanding what I'm trying to say, Inky. Your FAV means a lot to me. :-) Love and Light to you, Bill

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/30/2024 9:47:00 PM

Another fine philosophical poem. Good work.

Bill Baker
Date: 1/31/2024 9:47:00 PM

Thanks for the comment, Hilda. Have a nice evening, my friend. Bill

Eve Roper

Date: 1/30/2024 6:47:00 PM

Deep thoughts , I like the last line,” the best of you is actually the rest of you. Enjoyed reading.

Bill Baker
Date: 1/30/2024 8:30:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. I like thinking about that statement. A lot of good possibilities in it. Have a great week, my friend. Bill