Rainy Days and Mondays

Rainy days and Mondays 
the mood reflects red wine. 
Midsummer blues that stays, 
kindness is the sunshine.

The mood reflects red wine,
Nothing' to do, but frown; 
kindness is the sunshine,
don't let the sun go down.

Nothing' to do, but frown,
getting quite romantic 
don't let the sun go down 
feeling quite fantastic. 

Getting quite romantic;
midsummer blues that stays, 
feeling quite fantastic, 
rainy days and Mondays.


Rainy Days and Mondays by window pane
I stand and gaze; where innocent mind play
to frolic until the sunshine does stay.
Rainy Days and Mondays by window pane;
rain under my feet joyful, must refrain
to walk out in the rain not in its sway.
Rainy Days and Mondays by window pane;
I stand and gaze; where innocent mind play.


2/19/2018

Pantoum & Triolet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 7:27 PM
"the mood reflects red wine"!!!? Good choice of form. Congrats on your win, Eve.
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations, Eve for the wonderful win ...
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:15 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Eve :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:13 AM
Great pantoum and triolet Eve, I liked your take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Krampe Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 5:17 PM
I like your take on the contest prompt, Eve - good luck! I always admire people who can write pantoums.
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Again a lovely Patoum ... the rhythm is wonderful ...
Cunningham Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 3:05 AM
Red wine certain makes the sun shine within, helps to see beyond the grey. Tom
Poteet Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 4:48 PM
The wine is working even better than the whine to improve the day. Great write, Eve. I read it twice before recognizing the pantoum form.
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