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Rainy Days and Mondays

Rainy days and Mondays the mood reflects red wine. Midsummer blues that stays, kindness is the sunshine. The mood reflects red wine, Nothing' to do, but frown; kindness is the sunshine, don't let the sun go down. Nothing' to do, but frown, getting quite romantic don't let the sun go down feeling quite fantastic. Getting quite romantic; midsummer blues that stays, feeling quite fantastic, rainy days and Mondays. Rainy Days and Mondays by window pane I stand and gaze; where innocent mind play to frolic until the sunshine does stay. Rainy Days and Mondays by window pane; rain under my feet joyful, must refrain to walk out in the rain not in its sway. Rainy Days and Mondays by window pane; I stand and gaze; where innocent mind play. 2/19/2018 Pantoum & Triolet

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Date: 2/24/2018 7:27:00 PM
"the mood reflects red wine"!!!? Good choice of form. Congrats on your win, Eve.
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Date: 2/24/2018 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve for the wonderful win ...
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Date: 2/23/2018 6:15:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Eve :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2018 6:13:00 AM
Great pantoum and triolet Eve, I liked your take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/20/2018 5:17:00 PM
I like your take on the contest prompt, Eve - good luck! I always admire people who can write pantoums.
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Date: 2/20/2018 7:23:00 AM
Again a lovely Patoum ... the rhythm is wonderful ...
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Date: 2/20/2018 3:05:00 AM
Red wine certain makes the sun shine within, helps to see beyond the grey. Tom
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Date: 2/19/2018 4:48:00 PM
The wine is working even better than the whine to improve the day. Great write, Eve. I read it twice before recognizing the pantoum form.
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