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Rainy Day In May

Another rainy day in May Makes it hard to dream, in a way Dark clouds hover and want to stay Making it seem night during day The sun is hide and seek at play I’m waiting for the words to say That I cannot find as I lay Waiting, my body feels like clay *8 syllables per line Heidi Sands 5/29/17

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Roy Pett

Date: 5/30/2017 1:22:00 PM

Brilliant Monorhyme Heidi, it can rain everyday if it helps you compose wonderful poems such as this. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2017 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Roy. Your comment makes me smile. And it is raining again today!

Edward Mccall

Date: 5/30/2017 9:30:00 AM

Rainy days to make it hard to dream sometimes nicely done on the eight syllables per line.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2017 9:47:00 AM

Thanks so much Edward :)

White Wolf

Date: 5/29/2017 8:48:00 PM

Excellent job here, Heidi! I love how you managed 8 syllables a line too! Well done

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2017 7:35:00 AM

Thank you White Wolf :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/29/2017 5:41:00 PM

Hi Heidi, You have penned a good monorhyme. I could just picture the whole scene in my mind. Well done:-)Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2017 5:46:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. I appreciate your comment :) I may change it listed as a monorhyme, now that you mention it.

Chris Green

Date: 5/29/2017 5:16:00 PM

Really nicely done Heidi, definitely something wonderful came out of that rainy day.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2017 5:18:00 PM

Thanks Chris. I appreciate that, considering this is a dismal day here today. Take care :)