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Rainy Dawn

She wandered around with the blues, Free were the flow of her tears Glee was something once cherished, she had to Flee from her brokenhearted fears Rain accompanied the dawn, and Pain returned as it did before Slain by the fickle fate of love Reign of sadness came once more 2-2-2020 Writing Prompt- Let's Write a Lento- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 2/10/2020 2:04:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my Lento writing prompt challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 2/10/2020 7:08:00 PM
Thank you for my placement DH
Date: 2/9/2020 1:07:00 PM
I am going thru winners now and can see thankfully that this was on the list. Big congrats, Joseph.
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Date: 2/9/2020 12:35:00 PM
Beatifully sad and poignant, Joseph.
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Date: 2/9/2020 5:58:00 AM
I can feel sadness in each line. That's love.
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Date: 2/8/2020 12:56:00 PM
Hi Joseph.. Sadness~ alas! Captured so well. Good luck in this contest. Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/7/2020 1:56:00 AM
the poem makes me feel why should I reach for love = Just to be crushed by the weight of it all An everlasting pain
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Date: 2/4/2020 5:41:00 AM
the poem gave me visions of time fractured - like being in the upside down world - the physical and thee emotional are out of place
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Date: 2/3/2020 10:44:00 PM
Very sad, Joseph, nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/3/2020 3:49:00 PM
Such a melancholy poem joseph just the thing Constance loves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2020 3:03:00 PM
A sad poem about hopeless... A lot of emotion in your lento..
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Date: 2/3/2020 9:06:00 AM
Your poem evokes melancholy tones, as you intended--a lento so well executed, Joseph!
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Date: 2/2/2020 10:53:00 PM
I understand such a moment, the sky holding all the emotions. Tears are hidden deep within its melody. Your thoughts caress softly around me. ~ Brandy
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