Rainshadow

parched deprived rainshadow of leeward side the difference clear craving the rain but mountains don't move scorched

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/21/2023 1:54:00 PM

What a difference a mountain makes. Congratulations Di11y! :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/21/2023 2:16:00 PM

Indeed - the dark side :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2023 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations!! Way to go with this excellent winner. Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/20/2023 2:03:00 PM

Many thanks Sara, much appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2023 9:54:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, D.D. :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/20/2023 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise x

Lin Lane

Date: 8/20/2023 6:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning ninette, Dilly.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/20/2023 10:33:00 AM

Thanks Lin x

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/19/2023 3:08:00 PM

Dilly Dally, creative imagery paints a vivid picture of drought! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/19/2023 3:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim x

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 8/13/2023 7:21:00 AM

If you have the faith the size of this mustard grain and you say to this mountain move from here to there and it will move and nothing will be impossible for you. Mathew 17:20 . I repeat nothing .

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/13/2023 2:31:00 PM

I went away and checked whether Mark mentioned this - turned out he did. We studied Marks Gospel at school x