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raindrops and bubbles

elation ~ so immersive that you forget what follows the only way is down I was fine but now fine feels a bit drab then drab feels a bit painful the beauty of water sheen on roof tiles spoiled when you see the rain came in pouring rain, you're so pretty why must you break my heart beautiful things make us sad such an unsustainable element ~ beauty we shouldn't look at it or get involved the otherworld, we step into briefly just a bubble, irridescent ~ cocooned pop! then the world is too big there's space everywhere that can't be filled...

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Date: 11/20/2023 7:54:00 AM
I trully love this poem. It is a reminder of the circle of life and of the world. Thank you for writing.
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Date: 11/20/2023 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Hilda -glad you liked it x
Date: 11/20/2023 7:15:00 AM
A heartfelt and profound write with intriguing concepts, elation at the beginning and sadness at the end with great depth in between
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Date: 11/20/2023 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Clive - it was just written quickly as I looked out at the rain during lunch (luckily it hadn't actually rained in - I would have wrote about rain mixing with tears and a tantrum if it had). I appreciate your comment

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