Raindrops

"raindrops" as raindrops fall bouncing upon the pane countless thoughts run deep within my mind escaping me from reality blooming flowers droop causing only stems dark is the sky enlisting quietness forcing a state of mind clouds finally roll by dancing a pasodoble engaged am I facing new passion great power wakes SkyWatcher - 04-24-17 all is well just practicing the abc format

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John Michaels

Date: 4/25/2017 4:34:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Lisa. How would think that something as simple as rainfall could inspire such delightful prose. Well done! Regards, John.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/26/2017 3:46:00 PM

Top of the Evening once again John. Thank you Thank you. Believe it or not. It wasn't raining at the time. I was playing with the ABC. You generosity I do not take lightly. Have a wonderful night. See you soon on your page.

White Wolf

Date: 4/25/2017 1:19:00 AM

Stretching your poetic wings I see, Lisa! This is still one of the many forms I am yet to try! But you seem to have done it with great ease! lovely imagery in this piece! Well done.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/25/2017 4:20:00 AM

Hiya White Wolf. Top of the Evening to you. Thank you very much. Honestly. I so appreciate your generosity. Yes, I was just experimenting with the ABC. I will always love the Free Verse but at times I give her a rest. Thank you also for such wonderful commentary. Have a wonderful night and I will see you on your page.

Miraj Raha

Date: 4/24/2017 11:48:00 AM

beautiful description of raindrops.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/24/2017 1:27:00 PM

Hello Miraj. Thank you very much. I hope you enjoyed this entry and the scene. Enjoy the afternoon and poetry.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/24/2017 8:39:00 AM

What a lovely poem! The rain for some has an almost cathartic power on the mind and I love the way passion awakes as the clouds are dancing away. Lisa, I think you are so immensely talented because you can evoke so much in our mind, with just a few light strokes:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/24/2017 1:26:00 PM

Hi Anne-Marie. Good Afternoon. My goodness. Can I bottle up this review and your words. Thank you a million times and then some. Honestly. And yes, may your very words apply and revert back to you because they do. It is I who thinks you are the one with the talent. Extreme Talent that is. Never do I take your words or generosity for granted Anne-Marie. Honestly. Amities to you as well.

Chris Green

Date: 4/24/2017 8:31:00 AM

Lovely poem and format my friend. It seems the practice has paid off because you have crafted a wonderful piece here. And it is true, stormy days can cloud our thoughts but eventually the sun will come out and the beauty that appears because of the rain with lift our spirits and show us that there is good in everything. Beautifully done my friend.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/24/2017 1:23:00 PM

Hi Chris. Top of the Afternoon to you. Thank you Thank you. Yes, the rain do do many things and bring out many emotions. Thank you also for sharing your intake and feedback. I never take it for granted or lightly. Have a wonderful afternoon and keep writing those entries.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/24/2017 8:24:00 AM

The rains will quench the soil and all will bloom... Without knowing darkness we cannot fully appreciate the light.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/24/2017 1:19:00 PM

Good Afternoon Tim. How true. I so agree with your intake on life. Your review is more than fine and gracious. Have a wonderful afternoon. Hope all is well.