Raindrops

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raindrops light, soft hanging, drifting, suspending making the world a ghostly mist

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Sotto Poet

Date: 10/16/2023 6:59:00 PM

The breathtaking poem, akin to a skilled artist's paintbrush, delighted in the exquisite harmony that danced upon the windowpane. Such a sight brought immense pleasure and a sense of tranquility that was truly delightful.

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/16/2023 6:33:00 PM

impressive poem, like a paintbrush, enjoyed the sweet harmony on the window, thank you poet, this is so nice

Karen Jones

Date: 10/16/2023 4:56:00 PM

Beautiful word choice

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/16/2023 2:26:00 PM

Quite a journey from widow to sill -- I also have enjoyed such pattering enchantment. The view outside quit different, even spooky at times. Love it! Well done.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/16/2023 2:38:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Joe. I love to watch gentle rain pattering upon our windows...and I agree...sometimes the view is a bit eerie. I appreciate your ongoing support and encouragement. Enjoy your evening, Sara