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Raindrops

Warm raindrops gently fall with a whisper kisses caress my eyes and ruby lips ____________________________ September 22, 2019 Written for FFI Blog Series 6 - Tetractys Brian Strand Podium Place 1

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Date: 9/27/2019 2:18:00 AM
At first I thought this was a haiku; I ran up to see what it was. I do not know if I have ever tried one. But this is sweet.
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Date: 9/24/2019 2:36:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery in this little gem Constance! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/24/2019 4:13:00 PM
Connie thanks for the gorgeous!
Date: 9/24/2019 7:27:00 AM
A terrific tetractys constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/24/2019 8:09:00 AM
Jan thank you for the terrific !
Date: 9/23/2019 12:42:00 PM
All of you poems are so well written. I enjoy them greatly!
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Date: 9/23/2019 5:46:00 PM
Timothy, thanks, that is the best compliment !
Date: 9/22/2019 7:43:00 PM
Hi Dear Heart: beautiful Tetractys!
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Date: 9/22/2019 8:55:00 PM
Ralph, thank you so much !
Date: 9/22/2019 5:00:00 PM
Beautiful, Constance!
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Date: 9/22/2019 8:56:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the beautiful !
Date: 9/22/2019 2:53:00 PM
It has a haiku feel to it too.
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Date: 9/22/2019 8:56:00 PM
Andrea, yes, I did that on purpose
Date: 9/22/2019 2:53:00 PM
oh wow, I see you got placed in that blog competition! (did i get that right?) VERY nice, dear friend.
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Date: 9/22/2019 8:57:00 PM
Andrea, yes, I did get a podium 1 placement
Date: 9/22/2019 1:58:00 PM
- Lovely written ... love the last line, D.H. :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2019 8:57:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the lovely, yes, I love the last line too !
Date: 9/22/2019 12:26:00 PM
I loved the image of soft light raindrops as whispers and kisses, Dear Heart. Well done.
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Date: 9/22/2019 8:58:00 PM
Wendy, thank you so much for the compliment !
Date: 9/22/2019 12:01:00 PM
Perfectly expressed <3 Love this ~ a fav
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Date: 9/22/2019 12:11:00 PM
Hello, thanks for the love and the fav !
Date: 9/22/2019 11:35:00 AM
The raindrops of love...a loving write
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Date: 9/22/2019 11:57:00 AM
Arturo, thanks for the love!
Date: 9/22/2019 11:23:00 AM
A sensuous scene you painted in just a few words, Dear Heart. So well written!
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Date: 9/22/2019 11:56:00 AM
Vijay thank you for visiting and for the great comment!

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