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Rainbow On Other Side of Sky

Those who saw prairies bloom Remember well the dams he built Filling their abundant reservoirs Growing harvests they cherished Being the only bridge they had Standing over turbulent streams. When the nights reign moonless And clouds churn mighty storms Most people still remember him As ray of light when they were lost For he was their only lighthouse. His words enlightened their hearts, His actions charted pristine paths, Defying fiercely allure of wrongs Sacred was the sermon he doled out, Illustrious was he~ held in regard. Though he’s gone, he left his mark, Some have heard his clarion call, Inspired to follow in his footsteps, Planting the seeds of his message, Carrying his torch~ seeds to harvest. Esteemed is their beneficent voice Tolling of selflessness and sacrifice, Dedicating to others purpose of life Alleviating sufferings of human plight; Keeping the flame of goodwill alive Trekking through rains and clouds Leading the way, guiding how to find The rainbow on other side of sky. March 17, 2022 Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1092 Placed 2nd: Being A Light To Others Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 5/13/2022 9:27:00 AM
Very nice.
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Date: 3/29/2022 7:04:00 PM
Wonderful piece Vijay...God bless you.
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Date: 3/29/2022 8:57:00 AM
I must apologise for not reading your poems. Fact is that My prostrate cancer gave me hell. So easy to enter into a bad mood. The therapy I'm getting is full of side effects and I have lost my muse completely. At this point I am only posting old poems and not of a high standard. I do not expect you to comment on such trash. Once again my apologies. Regards
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Date: 3/28/2022 6:55:00 AM
Very deep and thought-provoking, Vijay:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 3/27/2022 12:38:00 PM
Helping others to find the light or being the light for them if needed, is a heart warming experience for both parties involved 'Being the rainbow on the other side of the sky' excellent poetry my friend. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer.
Date: 3/27/2022 5:54:00 AM
Vijay, brilliant & mysterioys. Johnny Appleseed and Daniel Boone come to mind. Shalom shalOm ?? Namasthe Sir Ji
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Anil.
Date: 3/26/2022 4:14:00 PM
Excellent entry, Vijay. I loved the mystery and intrigue presence without a name. I enjoyed every line. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Bill Good luck in the contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Bill.
Date: 3/26/2022 2:35:00 PM
He must have been a very inspiring and uplifting person. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for your visit. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 3/25/2022 11:43:00 AM
This poem is striking. Makes me stop and think. Excellent poetry Vijay. A special message for all :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:17:00 PM
So glad to hear that. Much appreciate, Heidi. Many thanks.
Date: 3/24/2022 3:07:00 PM
A beautiful poem with so many wonderful verses..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, SO.
Date: 3/23/2022 3:43:00 PM
Gorgeous writing!! Wow.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 3/22/2022 1:51:00 PM
Love the write! Love the imagery of moonless nights, clouds churn of mighty storms.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:16:00 PM
Much appreciate, Kim.
Date: 3/22/2022 9:19:00 AM
"The rainbow on other side of sky..." so beautiful, Vijay, as are the people who carry that rainbow.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:16:00 PM
Many thanks Ann.
Date: 3/21/2022 10:23:00 AM
How uplifting these words are, Vijay: There are many men and women that fit this story thankfully …..Our history is studded with them. I love your final line.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:15:00 PM
So true, SuZ. Much appreciate your comments--many thanks.
Date: 3/20/2022 9:02:00 PM
This poem is very inspiring too ! Most of the good deeds are done not for immediate gains, but for long standing gains for oneself and others ! Congratulations, on your win, Vijay !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:50:00 AM
Many thanks for your return visit Valsa. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 3/20/2022 4:05:00 PM
Very beautiful, inspiring write. This certainly begs us to look at our relationships in more positive light, and work toward even greater loving unity. Enjoyed your poem very much.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Joe--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/20/2022 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/uplifting write. Love it. Yes, we need to keep goodwill alive. Have a great/blessed day..............
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Date: 3/20/2022 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations for the placement and thanks for the entry :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:49:00 AM
Much appreciate, Anoucheka. Many thanks for sponsoring contests.
Date: 3/20/2022 7:05:00 AM
So inspiring... A beautiful tribute to a wonderful generous person and a perfect title... Congratulations...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:48:00 AM
Much appreciate Supraja--many thanks.
Date: 3/20/2022 6:45:00 AM
"Keeping the flame of goodwill alive" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:48:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj--much appreciate.
Date: 3/20/2022 12:32:00 AM
Wow, this is good, Vijay, a dedication and way forward with being human, and thinking of those to follow.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate.
Date: 3/19/2022 5:11:00 PM
So uplifting and a wonderful tribute to a beacon of light and love and hope and sacrifice. You have penned beautiful illuminated verses that give gratitude to this special light being . Wonderful Vijay ! Write on ! Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:47:00 AM
So very kind of you to say so. Much appreciate your complimentary remarks, Susan. Many thanks.
Date: 3/19/2022 2:24:00 PM
I thought maybe you were writing about Rumi in this glorious piece Vijay. His poetry has always inspired me. This is a magnificent expression of a light giver. Blessings xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:46:00 AM
In honor of those dedicate their lives to humanity. Much appreciate your insightful remarks, Connie. Many thanks.
Date: 3/19/2022 7:02:00 AM
Vijay, your lines are truly inspirational and are beautiful to read. People, as you so beautifully penned. are rare and to whom most can only aspire! Excellent ! Happy Saturday!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2022 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Mike--much appreciate.
Date: 3/18/2022 9:24:00 AM
- Some people leave deeper traces than others ... wonderfully written, Vijay :) - Have a lovely spring weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/18/2022 1:03:00 PM
So true, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
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