Get Your Premium Membership

Rainbow

the stain of Rain


Raindrops overhead
refreshing the soul within
mud under my shoe


***Medicine for my          
           Love the mud***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
1234
Date: 3/28/2016 12:35:00 AM
sweet imagery made me smile ^_^
Login to Reply
Date: 10/2/2015 8:22:00 AM
Linda, a big CONGRATULATIONS on having this beautiful write selected as a Feature Poem For the Week, enjoy the honor ~~
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2015 10:45:00 AM
A sweet haiku. I can feel the mud as I read this wonderful work! ;-) Congrats for being featured in PS home page Linda! ;-)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/30/2015 9:57:00 AM
Love this don to earth haiku. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2014 11:35:00 PM
Nice transition from whimsy to reality.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/7/2014 4:41:00 PM
raindrops overhead/refresh my tired bones- mud under my shoes [you would have two parts then Linda with refresh as the action/verb] BUT since mud under your shoes in the rain would not be a surprise in is not a good line 3 BUT it still would be a haiku [PS not every haiku I have up on soup IS a haiku I should take down the ones which aren't but I don't have the time -
Login to Reply
Guzzi Avatar
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/7/2014 4:41:00 PM
also there are others ways of doing the haiku Linda but they are too complicated right now for you until you at least master the 2 parts & the difference between objectivity & subjectivity]
Date: 10/1/2013 10:35:00 PM
Hi Destroyer. This takes all adults back to the innocence of being a kid and playing in the rain and mud. nice job
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2013 7:03:00 PM
Beautiful. Love the rain and the implied love. ~KIlmer
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2013 9:04:00 PM
short and sweet.love your new avitar but you are much prettier.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2013 10:04:00 PM
Heck yeah, this poem speaks to me. I can't agree more with the message. Rain is so healing not only to the soul, but nature itself. There is nothing more rewarding than a walk in the rain, perhaps with someone to talk to. But even in solitude, being with nature and the gentle rain...it's too beautiful. Love this Haiku. (: Always, Laura
Login to Reply
Date: 12/7/2012 10:02:00 AM
first time here, love this, pd, this is sure a clever poem. excellent...
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2012 8:51:00 PM
I remember being a kid playing in the rain and mud, still do at times, thanks for your poem and the memory, great write, love debra
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2012 3:30:00 AM
Congrats, pd, mud and puddles make the life of kids, hugs! Jag
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 8:58:00 PM
Into each life a little mud must be tracked in. Especially if one has kids. Loved it P.D. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 7:14:00 PM
very nice haiku PD....congrats on your win
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely win,PD .Ride on and thanks for stopping by my poems.Kudos to you always.XOXO..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 1:16:00 PM
Like it Pd love that last line its my garden, ha ha congrats sweetie xx
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest P.D..... I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2012 9:46:00 PM
too bad this was used already. I think it could have worked in Charles' contest too!! Congratulations, Irma. I really like it.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/15/2012 5:59:00 AM
As a child we loved mud!!!Congrad's Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 2/15/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations Pd. well done xx
Login to Reply
Date: 2/15/2012 2:54:00 AM
so creative and great study of contrast.. congrats, PD on your glittering win!..:) huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 2/14/2012 6:18:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this eve..Congrats..Way to go ..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 2/14/2012 4:20:00 PM
Congrats on your great win in Brian contest....Happy Valentine...XOXO....Olusegun..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/14/2012 2:58:00 PM
Contests on your great win! I, too, love the rain especially at night. Happy Valentines with hugs, Rhonda
Login to Reply
1234