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Rainbow

the stain of Rain Raindrops overhead refreshing the soul within mud under my shoe ***Medicine for my Love the mud***

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M. Kari Barr

Date: 3/28/2016 12:35:00 AM

sweet imagery made me smile ^_^

Constance La France

Date: 10/2/2015 8:22:00 AM

Linda, a big CONGRATULATIONS on having this beautiful write selected as a Feature Poem For the Week, enjoy the honor ~~

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/1/2015 10:45:00 AM

A sweet haiku. I can feel the mud as I read this wonderful work! ;-) Congrats for being featured in PS home page Linda! ;-)

Daver Austin

Date: 9/30/2015 9:57:00 AM

Love this don to earth haiku. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 5/21/2014 11:35:00 PM

Nice transition from whimsy to reality.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/7/2014 4:41:00 PM

raindrops overhead/refresh my tired bones- mud under my shoes [you would have two parts then Linda with refresh as the action/verb] BUT since mud under your shoes in the rain would not be a surprise in is not a good line 3 BUT it still would be a haiku [PS not every haiku I have up on soup IS a haiku I should take down the ones which aren't but I don't have the time -

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/7/2014 4:41:00 PM

also there are others ways of doing the haiku Linda but they are too complicated right now for you until you at least master the 2 parts & the difference between objectivity & subjectivity]

Robin Davis

Date: 10/1/2013 10:35:00 PM

Hi Destroyer. This takes all adults back to the innocence of being a kid and playing in the rain and mud. nice job

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 9/29/2013 7:03:00 PM

Beautiful. Love the rain and the implied love. ~KIlmer

Colleen Bono

Date: 6/1/2013 9:04:00 PM

short and sweet.love your new avitar but you are much prettier.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/22/2013 10:04:00 PM

Heck yeah, this poem speaks to me. I can't agree more with the message. Rain is so healing not only to the soul, but nature itself. There is nothing more rewarding than a walk in the rain, perhaps with someone to talk to. But even in solitude, being with nature and the gentle rain...it's too beautiful. Love this Haiku. (: Always, Laura

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/7/2012 10:02:00 AM

first time here, love this, pd, this is sure a clever poem. excellent...

Debra Falgout

Date: 9/1/2012 8:51:00 PM

I remember being a kid playing in the rain and mud, still do at times, thanks for your poem and the memory, great write, love debra

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/31/2012 3:30:00 AM

Congrats, pd, mud and puddles make the life of kids, hugs! Jag

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/30/2012 8:58:00 PM

Into each life a little mud must be tracked in. Especially if one has kids. Loved it P.D. Love, Joyce

Joseph May

Date: 8/30/2012 7:14:00 PM

very nice haiku PD....congrats on your win

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/30/2012 6:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your lovely win,PD .Ride on and thanks for stopping by my poems.Kudos to you always.XOXO..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/30/2012 1:16:00 PM

Like it Pd love that last line its my garden, ha ha congrats sweetie xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest P.D..... I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol