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Rain, The Story 1 of 3

Entry submitted in honor of - Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Rain, The Story 1/ 3 I am telling you a story of a lovely girl Rain, So cute and charming she was, Like a fairy or a refreshing drop of rain. Rain had two heavenly white horses, Beautiful, fierce and bold, like demons on earth, She used to ride these bold and beautiful, one by one and They liked Rain, like a fairy from heaven. She had named the male horse as Past, and the female as Future, Every day, she used to talk with them like humans, As they were accomplishing, many of her unusual thoughts. One day, while she was standing, beside her horse named Past, Rain was trying to read in his lovely eyes, The golden pages of her bygone past, She knew that only her lovely friend Past, Could bring back to her, the memories of her, Most cherished love Aiden and the images of her lovely past, As only few years back, she had lost her love Aiden. Her most dear lovely horse Past Was a brilliant piece of creation, Having the silk color, of ivory white, He was even capable to unfold before Rain, Those bygone images and stories of Rain’s lovely past, When she used to often fly and dance like a butter fly, And felt blooming like the petals of a lovely yellow Rose, Amid the company of her love Aiden, she unfortunately lost. She came close, to her dear graceful Horse Past And looked deep into the mysterious eyes of her favorite Past, The Horse Past came to know immediately, What Rain was trying to find, in the eyes of her dear friend Past, Next moment, she felt mesmerized and lost in a new world, Created by the wonderful eyes of her brilliant horse Past. In the enchanting depths, of the horse eyes, She began to feel herself comfortable and completely lost, Rain felt as if she was standing, on a ground full of ice like sand, Where her love Aiden was calling her, from a little far off, A little away from her, but not too close, Aiden had extended his hands to take her in his arms. She ran to meet her love and to be in his strong lovely arms, Embracing, kissing and looking without moving her eyes from him, This was always a passion for Rain, like a dream thought. Ravindra Kanpur India 28th Dec. 2010 Continue in part 2 Contest entry: For this contest only Contest Name: Rain, The Story Sponsored by: Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Written by: Ravindra K Kapoor

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Date: 1/14/2011 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations Ravindra on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations, Ravindra, I just knew I would see a big win for you with this beauty! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:39:00 AM
How interesting that Rain could learn about the past from her horse. I have always had a special connection with horses and I love the way you created this fantasy. Beautifully written, Ravindra. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2011 9:57:00 AM
A beautiful story charmingly written. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/13/2011 8:37:00 AM
I remember reading this amazing journey of a poem, and thinking how wonderful that you took this challenge, and made it even more enchanting! What a wonderful story should be published!! Just wonderful dear friend Ravindra pleasure to read! love, Carrie
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations onb this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, Ravindra
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:01:00 PM
Many Congrats Ravindra on big win with this creative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:24:00 PM
Congrats Ravindra on your magnificent win in the Rain Story contest with this exquisite entry my friend... such a lovely piece ..enjoy with luv a well deserved top spot..
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:00:00 PM
A beautiful story. Lots of congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:53:00 AM
Interesting take on Constance's story. Wishing you ALL the best in the New year! Light & Love
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Date: 12/30/2010 1:45:00 AM
The beginning of a charming poem' Lin~Ra
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:10:00 PM
what a lovely past she had. You sure took this challenge to heart, Ravindra. Very ambitious and I see there are two more sections? You have woven a fine legend for us here. On to next page!!
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:00:00 PM
Ravindra.. a magnificent story u have begun with this poem and series.. excellent and exceptional entry into the contest.... Constance will simply adore this creation and the wonderful story of Rain... awesome ...good luck my friend and a very Happy New Year with richest blessings from above...with luv..
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:37:00 PM
Lovely Ravindra,, it is amazing to see you enter a contest. And when I saw the title, I wondered about the title.. It was a very refreshing poem to read.. i can feel and see the image of the lovely story here,, Passion,, I love your ending line,...Poet D..
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:33:00 PM
FOR KIND ATTEN. OF Constance. NOTE: I had posted the entire three-part Poem on 28th Dec. 10 but while checking on 29th, I have found that, the second part is missing. I reposted it twice thrice but again the same problem. Part II is vanishing after posting it. Hope you have received all the three parts; if not kindly let me know. ..Ravindra
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:56:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest. Looking forward to reading this story when time to judge.
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