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Rain, Rain

(Rain is wreaking havoc in our land due to depression formed in the Bay of Bengal)
Over me a grey dappled cloud ridden sky no one yearns to gaze at below me, rushing rivulets of water! between, needles of rain that sings to nobody but pricking every heart, scripting tragic tales! ___________________________ May.11. 2022-05-11 Placed Fifth A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/4/2022 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Valsa. Excellent description of the weather problems you're facing. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Date: 5/13/2022 5:16:00 PM
Such a cinematic rendition of sublime composition! Excellent!! congratulations dear friend!
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Date: 5/13/2022 3:10:00 PM
Back with heartfelt congratulations for your contest win, Valsa.
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Date: 5/12/2022 1:09:00 AM
Or as the farmers call it, liquid sunshine. Tom
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Date: 5/11/2022 11:14:00 AM
'Needles of rain' - a very apt description!... When the rain comes in torrents, like iron spikes driving through you. :) gw
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Date: 5/11/2022 9:57:00 AM
Where do you live in India that is enjoying a drop of rain? Aloha!
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Date: 5/11/2022 6:33:00 AM
Dear Valsa, you have captured some beautiful gloomy shots. Although breathtakingly gorgeous, it is sad that this magnificent environment has been tarnished.
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Date: 5/11/2022 5:55:00 AM
Sad. Sis Valsa. Climate change; stubborn humans. We can turn it around ... Only if ( third stanza is powerful, uniquely spelled out in hearts accents). Shalom shalom
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Date: 5/11/2022 5:04:00 AM
Rainy, gloomy frames--well captured, Valsa.
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Date: 5/11/2022 2:47:00 AM
Impressively beautiful, my dearest, Valsa. Heaven's melody! Blessings.
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Date: 5/11/2022 1:45:00 AM
Pity that a lovey landscape is spoilt.
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