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Rain Falling

rain falling on leaves falling on the earth falling suspended in space those shapes that linger not yet touched by fingers of God’s humanity waiting to fall to be caught pressed and placed in His timeless book his and her names ~ leaves of gold 11/9/2018 Daniel 12:1b - But at that time your people — everyone whose name is found written in the book — will be delivered. (NIV)

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Date: 11/14/2018 10:48:00 AM
This is such a touching poem Kim. Liked it alot! Well done, xoxo, Jennifer
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2018 11:37:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 11/14/2018 10:47:00 AM
This is such a touching poem Kim. Liked it alot! Well done, xoxo, Jennifer
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Date: 11/10/2018 4:09:00 PM
So touching and soothing, echoes like rain on the window-
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2018 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/9/2018 5:24:00 PM
Lovely Kim Beautiful imagery Good stuff. And thanks for the well wishes. I'm doing better with cortisone shots. They help the pain a lot. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2018 5:58:00 PM
Glad to hear it, Judy :)
Date: 11/9/2018 4:10:00 PM
In our evil world there will be many who will not be in the book. But thankfully there will be many who will. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2018 5:49:00 PM
Like many things both a happy and sad moment...but this one has eternal consequences. Thank you, Tom!
Date: 11/9/2018 1:29:00 PM
:) I like
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2018 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Eve!

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