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Raindrops On the Roof

tanka On the edge of sleep lulled by the rain on the roof my fluffy pillow whispers a telling secret sudden damper on my dreams written 17 January 2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/29/2016 8:45:00 PM

REASON, Congratulations on your "Syllables of Wisdom 3 WIN." Hugs. LINDA -

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2016 7:31:00 PM

wow, a really good one down here!! I sure like yours, Reason.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/5/2016 11:02:00 AM

thanks, Andrea.

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 12:36:00 PM

REASON, congratulations on your Syllables of Wisdom 3 win. *SKAT*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/21/2016 4:44:00 AM

Congrats on ur very wise winning write Reason! Great tanka!

Tim Smith

Date: 1/17/2016 4:30:00 PM

Great tanka. I love it...a 7 and fave

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 1/20/2016 1:09:00 PM

thanks Tim, appreciate the rank and comment. only a matter of time with a roof and rain.

Tim Smith
Date: 1/17/2016 4:31:00 PM

I love sleeping to the sound of rain.