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Reason A. Poteet

Raindrops On the Roof

tanka

On the edge of sleep
lulled by the rain on the roof
my fluffy pillow
whispers a telling secret
sudden damper on my dreams

written 17 January 2016

Copyright © Reason A. Poteet | Year Posted 2016

11th graderainsleeptanka

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Poet Destroyer A

January 29, 2016 at 8:45 PM

REASON, Congratulations on your "Syllables of Wisdom 3 WIN." Hugs. LINDA -

Andrea Dietrich

January 23, 2016 at 7:31 PM

wow, a really good one down here!! I sure like yours, Reason.

Reason A. Poteet

February 5, 2016 at 11:02 AM

thanks, Andrea.

January 21, 2016 at 12:36 PM

REASON, congratulations on your Syllables of Wisdom 3 win. *SKAT*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

January 21, 2016 at 4:44 AM

Congrats on ur very wise winning write Reason! Great tanka!

January 17, 2016 at 4:30 PM

Great tanka. I love it...a 7 and fave

Reason A. Poteet

January 20, 2016 at 1:09 PM

thanks Tim, appreciate the rank and comment. only a matter of time with a roof and rain.

January 17, 2016 at 4:31 PM

I love sleeping to the sound of rain.

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