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"How my heart waver without thee" Rick Parise ~ ...has not your loving song drizzled purity upon my canopy of loneliness ...has not your song of love come quickly from mountains afar ...has not your crystal love fallen upon my soul of need my relentless bringer of life o how I call to your worthiness o how I yearn to bathe in your everlasting love within each moment of your subtle loyalty I fall helpless within your downpour... between each breath you touch my lips...

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Date: 7/18/2011 12:21:00 PM
Wow Rick, an absolute stunner!! Congratulations on your win.. ;)
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:11:00 AM
This is a Free Verse MASTERPIECE! Rick. This goes to my fav's. Lainie
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Date: 7/18/2011 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 10:54:00 PM
sooo cool, rick.. sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:49:00 PM
This sure is one wonderful write on rain, Rick, almost like an ode :) Super congrats on your win, Rick :D
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Date: 7/17/2011 8:21:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., Rick
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Date: 7/17/2011 7:24:00 AM
Congrats my poet friend!!! what a fine write of the Rain....Michael
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Date: 7/17/2011 7:19:00 AM
what a great habit to continually congratulate a great poet and my friend Rick on another phenomenal win with equally phenom poetry .. oh so grand luv..enjoy..
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Date: 7/17/2011 2:27:00 AM
Rick, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d
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