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Rain

cumulonimbus clouds gather
 over the far reaches of the sky
rain pelts down in needles of silver 
earth is tickled by the pin pricks 
dormant dreams resurrect
blossoming every heart and the land

October.21.2022

Bite size Poem.No.54. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Line Gauthier

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2022

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Sam Kauffman Date: 11/13/2022 9:26:00 AM Valsa, congratulations on your win! What stunning imagery - rain as "needles of silver!" Everything thing you write is so visual and so original! Wonderful writing dear friend! Blessings! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/11/2022 10:03:00 AM Congratulations on your deserved win, Valsa. You write with the eagerness of a pluviophile. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/9/2022 11:01:00 AM aha, I see you got your well deserved win. Congrats! Login to Reply

Ann Peck Date: 11/9/2022 9:13:00 AM Very beautiful, dear Valsa. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 11/9/2022 8:08:00 AM Rain is wonderfully described in each line of your poem my dear friend Valsa. I love rain and I love this poem a lot. A fave. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your win and this superb write! Blessings. Hugs Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 11/9/2022 7:34:00 AM Congratulations, a unique description, like the tears of Angel's! Login to Reply

Terry Miller Date: 11/9/2022 5:26:00 AM Excellent poem congratulations Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 11/8/2022 8:54:00 PM Charming poem ~ congrats on podium finish Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 11/9/2022 8:26:00 AM Thank you so much Line Gauthier for picking up my poem for a win.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/24/2022 11:21:00 AM This paints a nostalgic picture of how neighborhoods in years gone by were often near farms or forests and how wonderful it was to watch the rain pelt down and even more, to smell as water and sand combined on a hot summer day leaving a trail of earthy steam rising from the hot ground. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/23/2022 6:27:00 PM Nicely done. Acupuncture for the Earth! :) gw Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/21/2022 2:52:00 PM wow, Valsa, this is so pretty. I hope you get a win. It would be well deserved. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 10/21/2022 1:44:00 PM A poem that captures the essence of rain, which is something we could all need more of. The soothing sound of rain has a calming effect on both the heart and the thoughts. Outstanding work, Valsa, best wishes for the contest Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 10/21/2022 1:15:00 PM We have been without rain for a long time, this makes me long for those 'needles of silver' to refresh the land, so skillfully expressed~ Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/21/2022 12:42:00 PM Dear Valsa, a poem that is so descriptive on rain which we all need. So far in Malta it only rained once. Best for a win. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/21/2022 11:58:00 AM Comforting sound of rain--sooths hearts and minds. Lovely write, Valsa. Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 10/21/2022 10:55:00 AM If only rain would sink in instead of flood! Perhaps someday government will get wise to that! Enjoyed, Valsa! Aloha! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/21/2022 9:43:00 AM Lovely imagery, Valsa! Login to Reply

Stephan McBride Date: 10/21/2022 9:36:00 AM Amen, I love it , very beautiful picture, love ya take care Login to Reply