Rain

cumulonimbus clouds gather over the far reaches of the sky rain pelts down in needles of silver earth is tickled by the pin pricks dormant dreams resurrect blossoming every heart and the land October.21.2022 Bite size Poem.No.54. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/13/2022 9:26:00 AM

Valsa, congratulations on your win! What stunning imagery - rain as "needles of silver!" Everything thing you write is so visual and so original! Wonderful writing dear friend! Blessings!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2022 10:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your deserved win, Valsa. You write with the eagerness of a pluviophile. ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2022 11:01:00 AM

aha, I see you got your well deserved win. Congrats!

Ann Peck

Date: 11/9/2022 9:13:00 AM

Very beautiful, dear Valsa. Congratulations!

Len Gasun

Date: 11/9/2022 8:08:00 AM

Rain is wonderfully described in each line of your poem my dear friend Valsa. I love rain and I love this poem a lot. A fave. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your win and this superb write! Blessings. Hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/9/2022 7:34:00 AM

Congratulations, a unique description, like the tears of Angel's!

Terry Miller

Date: 11/9/2022 5:26:00 AM

Excellent poem congratulations

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/8/2022 8:54:00 PM

Charming poem ~ congrats on podium finish

Valsa George
Date: 11/9/2022 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Line Gauthier for picking up my poem for a win.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/24/2022 11:21:00 AM

This paints a nostalgic picture of how neighborhoods in years gone by were often near farms or forests and how wonderful it was to watch the rain pelt down and even more, to smell as water and sand combined on a hot summer day leaving a trail of earthy steam rising from the hot ground. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/23/2022 6:27:00 PM

Nicely done. Acupuncture for the Earth! :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2022 2:52:00 PM

wow, Valsa, this is so pretty. I hope you get a win. It would be well deserved.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/21/2022 1:44:00 PM

A poem that captures the essence of rain, which is something we could all need more of. The soothing sound of rain has a calming effect on both the heart and the thoughts. Outstanding work, Valsa, best wishes for the contest