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Rain-Drenched Hair

The veil became a shroud - doused lips swan-blue. Her rain-drenched hair, adrift, began to croak. She was weighed down by the diamond-rock. He glared into the dumb blond’s jilted eyes. The bloated ballerina-bride — flotsam. The mast of rain-drenched hair caught ‘round his boat. Reunited - two souls twist stark in lake. Alas, each one upset, the other’s kiss. 4/4/2019 Writing Challenge 1- April, 2019 - Its All About 8 - Poetry Contest Sponsor - Dear Heart

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Date: 4/25/2019 7:04:00 AM
I have read your creative winning work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thanks, Sara! :)
Date: 4/23/2019 11:29:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative Elegy !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2019 4:42:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 4/6/2019 4:56:00 AM
Well written, visual, effective, and good, winning wishes are being sent and a heart blessing too xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2019 5:25:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend! Be blessed!

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