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Raging River

Raging river streams And cascades with soothing sound; Roaring down the falls.

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Danielle Moreno

Date: 1/26/2009 3:32:00 PM

Great job Raul that was a good poem.......................................................Danielle

Steve Edmonds

Date: 12/18/2008 2:48:00 AM

Nice haiku Raul, I love water scenes. Caramel

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/14/2008 12:03:00 PM

I see your haiku made it to the hot list, congrats. DN

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/14/2008 12:00:00 PM

Great haiku..........very nice

Steve Edmonds

Date: 12/14/2008 11:56:00 AM

Nice work, great words.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/14/2008 11:14:00 AM

This is a nice Haiku. I really enjoy the scene you painted here. Love Elizabeth

Date: 12/11/2008 1:13:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration to paint a picture with words. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Karen

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/10/2008 1:15:00 AM

Great job here in describing the water falling. I can imagine it and I can hear it when I close my eyes. DN

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/9/2008 4:58:00 PM

Lovely Haiku... I love water and this is beautiful.BG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/9/2008 4:45:00 PM

Great Haiku. The imagery is wonderful, very vivid. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/9/2008 4:37:00 PM

I can hear it, and I can see it. So beautiful and well written! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/9/2008 3:13:00 PM

Wonderful picture you have painted with your words! Well done Haiku!~ Carrie

Michael Torres

Date: 12/9/2008 1:10:00 PM

Remind's me of Niagra Falls Raul. This is beautiful. GBU Michael