Raging River

Raging river streams
And cascades with soothing sound;
Roaring down the falls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
January 26, 2009 at 3:32 PM
Great job Raul that was a good poem.......................................................Danielle
Edmonds Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 2:48 AM
Nice haiku Raul, I love water scenes. Caramel
Neal Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 12:03 PM
I see your haiku made it to the hot list, congrats. DN
Lopez Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 12:00 PM
Great haiku..........very nice
Edmonds Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:56 AM
Nice work, great words.
Neal Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:14 AM
This is a nice Haiku. I really enjoy the scene you painted here. Love Elizabeth
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December 11, 2008 at 1:13 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration to paint a picture with words. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Karen
Neal Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 1:15 AM
Great job here in describing the water falling. I can imagine it and I can hear it when I close my eyes. DN
Gorelick Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 4:58 PM
Lovely Haiku... I love water and this is beautiful.BG
Gass Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 4:45 PM
Great Haiku. The imagery is wonderful, very vivid. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love Robin
Winter Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 4:37 PM
I can hear it, and I can see it. So beautiful and well written! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 3:13 PM
Wonderful picture you have painted with your words! Well done Haiku!~ Carrie
Torres Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 1:10 PM
Remind's me of Niagra Falls Raul. This is beautiful. GBU Michael
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