Raging River

Raging river streams
And cascades with soothing sound;
Roaring down the falls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/26/2009 3:32:00 PM
Great job Raul that was a good poem.......................................................Danielle
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Date: 12/18/2008 2:48:00 AM
Nice haiku Raul, I love water scenes. Caramel
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Date: 12/14/2008 12:03:00 PM
I see your haiku made it to the hot list, congrats. DN
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Date: 12/14/2008 12:00:00 PM
Great haiku..........very nice
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Date: 12/14/2008 11:56:00 AM
Nice work, great words.
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Date: 12/14/2008 11:14:00 AM
This is a nice Haiku. I really enjoy the scene you painted here. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/11/2008 1:13:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration to paint a picture with words. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Karen
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Date: 12/10/2008 1:15:00 AM
Great job here in describing the water falling. I can imagine it and I can hear it when I close my eyes. DN
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Date: 12/9/2008 4:58:00 PM
Lovely Haiku... I love water and this is beautiful.BG
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Date: 12/9/2008 4:45:00 PM
Great Haiku. The imagery is wonderful, very vivid. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love Robin
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Date: 12/9/2008 4:37:00 PM
I can hear it, and I can see it. So beautiful and well written! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/9/2008 3:13:00 PM
Wonderful picture you have painted with your words! Well done Haiku!~ Carrie
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Date: 12/9/2008 1:10:00 PM
Remind's me of Niagra Falls Raul. This is beautiful. GBU Michael
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