Racing With Time

’ ‘’’’’ ‘’ ‘ this thing called time ; i can't quite pin down the humor, the thrill, and the pang , how it marinades or starts to evaporate to the point that days look bright or dim, while life zooms on some borrowed ride then snuffs a longing smile, a booming cry right down to the ground…my, oh my! the next moment or come near daybreak; i pick my feet up to embrace yesterday’s shocks plucking joy for sweet love to share around, then redeem a truant relapse moody time … darn! i try to feel it, blurt it, taste it, and exclaim, “what a joyful world !” , even when traffic sucks! © *small caps are intentionally used For Russell Sivey: Tons of Comma Fun Written by: nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 15, 2012 at 11:31 AM
Yeah That is OK for Debbie's contest...Nette.
Brown Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Tons Of Comma Fun" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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February 13, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Why am I not surprised your entry is in the winners column? Once again, Nette, very nice work and congratulations on your 2nd place win in Russell's contest...................S.Ronthorpe
Gorelick Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 4:48 PM
Congrats nette...another win for you. BG
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations Nette. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Congrats, nette. Awesome piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
Horsman Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 3:22 AM
i love Time poems, nette, and this is a wonderful example, love this well deserved winner. harry
Kendrick Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 5:12 PM
Congrats..Way to go Lady...Sara
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January 28, 2012 at 9:45 PM
Nette Clever piece nette, what an artistic way of using the commas. I agree traffic "sucks". It wastes our precious time. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for placing my "Serenity Response" in the winning list. I really have no clue who the judges are. Love Dalila
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January 27, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Elusive, intrusive time. We curse it, love every moment of it and at its worst it is what best heals. A great poem that provokes much thought. Brilliantly written! It should do very well in the contest.
Squyres Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 8:01 PM
Loved the last line...and the rest also. Time, friend or Foe...moves on !! Enjoyed !!
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January 26, 2012 at 7:15 PM
traffic sucks!... it's pretty brilliant with your Racing With Time title. I enjoy tremendously your free verse nette, it's always a form that allows me to see with no need of veils. good luck on the contest and thanks for stopping by
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 5:20 PM
Very nice and upbeat one for Russell's contest, Nette! Good luck in the contest.
B Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 11:00 AM
The joys of our individual time travels as seen through the eyes of Mrs. Nette. You capture the intricacies of all the emotion it elicits and its frantic pace. Well done, good luck in the contest!
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Very creative ideas about the topic of time..Enjoyed reading your contest entry ...Reads like a winner..Good luck..Thanks for the kind review of my work.The last line of my work was left short intentionally.Sara
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January 26, 2012 at 9:02 AM
such a wonderful intense write Nette luv.. will do winning ways for the contest .. now.. can we write more than one Sijo for your new contest??? will wait to hear from u before posting the lines I have already luv.. good luck.
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January 26, 2012 at 2:21 AM
A wonderful write here Net enjoyed reading it......spandan.
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January 26, 2012 at 12:16 AM
Fab write Nette very clever, Bren : )
Pettit Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 11:38 PM
Time waits for nobody. We are prisoners within it. Good write Nette.
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