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Racing With Time

’ ‘’’’’ ‘’ ‘ this thing called time ; i can't quite pin down the humor, the thrill, and the pang , how it marinades or starts to evaporate to the point that days look bright or dim, while life zooms on some borrowed ride then snuffs a longing smile, a booming cry right down to the ground…my, oh my! the next moment or come near daybreak; i pick my feet up to embrace yesterday’s shocks plucking joy for sweet love to share around, then redeem a truant relapse moody time … darn! i try to feel it, blurt it, taste it, and exclaim, “what a joyful world !” , even when traffic sucks! © *small caps are intentionally used For Russell Sivey: Tons of Comma Fun Written by: nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/15/2012 11:31:00 AM
Yeah That is OK for Debbie's contest...Nette.
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Date: 2/14/2012 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Tons Of Comma Fun" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2012 8:09:00 AM
Why am I not surprised your entry is in the winners column? Once again, Nette, very nice work and congratulations on your 2nd place win in Russell's contest...................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/11/2012 4:48:00 PM
Congrats nette...another win for you. BG
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Date: 2/11/2012 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations Nette. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/11/2012 7:59:00 AM
Congrats, nette. Awesome piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/11/2012 3:22:00 AM
i love Time poems, nette, and this is a wonderful example, love this well deserved winner. harry
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Date: 2/10/2012 5:12:00 PM
Congrats..Way to go Lady...Sara
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Date: 1/28/2012 9:45:00 PM
Nette Clever piece nette, what an artistic way of using the commas. I agree traffic "sucks". It wastes our precious time. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for placing my "Serenity Response" in the winning list. I really have no clue who the judges are. Love Dalila
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Date: 1/27/2012 1:21:00 AM
Elusive, intrusive time. We curse it, love every moment of it and at its worst it is what best heals. A great poem that provokes much thought. Brilliantly written! It should do very well in the contest.
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Date: 1/26/2012 8:01:00 PM
Loved the last line...and the rest also. Time, friend or Foe...moves on !! Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:15:00 PM
traffic sucks!... it's pretty brilliant with your Racing With Time title. I enjoy tremendously your free verse nette, it's always a form that allows me to see with no need of veils. good luck on the contest and thanks for stopping by
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Date: 1/26/2012 5:20:00 PM
Very nice and upbeat one for Russell's contest, Nette! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/26/2012 11:00:00 AM
The joys of our individual time travels as seen through the eyes of Mrs. Nette. You capture the intricacies of all the emotion it elicits and its frantic pace. Well done, good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/26/2012 9:15:00 AM
Very creative ideas about the topic of time..Enjoyed reading your contest entry ...Reads like a winner..Good luck..Thanks for the kind review of my work.The last line of my work was left short intentionally.Sara
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Date: 1/26/2012 9:02:00 AM
such a wonderful intense write Nette luv.. will do winning ways for the contest .. now.. can we write more than one Sijo for your new contest??? will wait to hear from u before posting the lines I have already luv.. good luck.
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Date: 1/26/2012 2:21:00 AM
A wonderful write here Net enjoyed reading it......spandan.
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:16:00 AM
Fab write Nette very clever, Bren : )
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Date: 1/25/2012 11:38:00 PM
Time waits for nobody. We are prisoners within it. Good write Nette.
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