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quixotic query -

can you tell me ...

where have true hearts gone -
bosoms that heave
with thrums of passion and mystery?
could it be these antediluvian
eyes are just shortening shadows -
daubing change and momentum with
the dark shades of what was?
I yearn for a kindred soul
of that rare ilk -
one I could offer up a word to
in appreciation, who would need that
word ONLY to swim my intent …
a breath of "moon" to such
would bring a dreamy sparkle to the eye …
the word "ocean" would conjure
a tender smile and soft glint ...
to but whisper "kiss"
would effect a sensing sigh
and an immortal, faraway gaze
of a depth unconquered.
I plunge every ephemeral eye
that meets mine of late
yet that spark -
that knowing, congeneric gleam -
is not to be found.
have the modern concerns
drowned our fires?
does this world spin too fast for
those flames to light?
oh, please say it is not so -
that I am mistaken …
for it is the foolish hope of finding it
that still quickens my step ...

and my heart.







~ 1st Place ~  in the "Choose Your Own Title Volume 7, Songs - Any Form" Poetry Contest, Edward Ibeh, Judge & Sponsor.

* I used song number one (#1) "Bliss" by Alpha 9 - it brought these things to mind. *
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Hamilton Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 9:16 PM
Another write another win...ohh the monotony...lol not. Great write G, stands for gorgeous!
Barden Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Sir John! :o)
Blodgett Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 5:43 PM
Greg, your poem exacts the worry of the world!! Thank you for so eloquently putting it forward in a way that touches our hearts and spirits. Lonna
Barden Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Oh you are very kind, Lonna, and I so greatly appreciate your comments! :o) <3
Ibeh Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 5:31 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this truly superb poem, Greg!:-)
Barden Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 7:24 PM
Many kind thanks, Edward, I am so pleased that you found this one worthy - blessings, friend! :o)
Mcgee Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 10:15 AM
I loved where your words took me. A state of wanting and waiting. Nice!
Barden Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 10:54 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Jeanne, I'm so pleased that you like this one -= blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Michael Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:08 AM
Well done...Poetry all the way...
Barden Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 10:53 PM
Thank you so much, Arturo, I greatly appreciate it! :-)
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