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can you tell me ... where have true hearts gone - bosoms that heave with thrums of passion and mystery? could it be these antediluvian eyes are just shortening shadows - daubing change and momentum with the dark shades of what was? I yearn for a kindred soul of that rare ilk - one I could offer up a word to in appreciation, who would need that word ONLY to swim my intent … a breath of "moon" to such would bring a dreamy sparkle to the eye … the word "ocean" would conjure a tender smile and soft glint ... to but whisper "kiss" would effect a sensing sigh and an immortal, faraway gaze of a depth unconquered. I plunge every ephemeral eye that meets mine of late yet that spark - that knowing, congeneric gleam - is not to be found. have the modern concerns drowned our fires? does this world spin too fast for those flames to light? oh, please say it is not so - that I am mistaken … for it is the foolish hope of finding it that still quickens my step ... and my heart. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Choose Your Own Title Volume 7, Songs - Any Form" Poetry Contest, Edward Ibeh, Judge & Sponsor. * I used song number one (#1) "Bliss" by Alpha 9 - it brought these things to mind. *

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Date: 8/20/2019 9:16:00 PM
Another write another win...ohh the monotony...lol not. Great write G, stands for gorgeous!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 7:25:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Sir John! :o)
Date: 8/20/2019 5:43:00 PM
Greg, your poem exacts the worry of the world!! Thank you for so eloquently putting it forward in a way that touches our hearts and spirits. Lonna
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 7:25:00 PM
Oh you are very kind, Lonna, and I so greatly appreciate your comments! :o) <3
Date: 8/20/2019 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this truly superb poem, Greg!:-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 7:24:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Edward, I am so pleased that you found this one worthy - blessings, friend! :o)
Date: 7/27/2019 10:15:00 AM
I loved where your words took me. A state of wanting and waiting. Nice!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/27/2019 10:54:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Jeanne, I'm so pleased that you like this one -= blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 7/27/2019 3:08:00 AM
Well done...Poetry all the way...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/27/2019 10:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Arturo, I greatly appreciate it! :-)

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