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Quiver

The silhouette of your memory comes like a soft dark rendering drawn on the wall of my mind to visit, to remember there I've sketched your likeness with the crumbled charcoal from our love left in the silent ashes when I felt a cold quiver in my soul as you quietly moved your hand away the space between filled with silence though my heart heard your voice from within 9/27/21 contest "Q" new only sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 10/5/2021 7:01:00 PM
Superbly penned! Happy to have come across this outstanding work
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Date: 10/5/2021 10:30:00 AM
wow ~ beautiful poem, superbly penned, Frederic.
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Date: 10/5/2021 9:03:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this beautifully penned poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 10/4/2021 9:06:00 PM
"heart heard your voice from within" is Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/28/2021 12:09:00 PM
I can feel the pain.. especially in these lines... with the crumbled charcoal from our love left in the silent ashes when I felt a cold quiver in my soul
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