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Quietus

I love to be saturated in the bliss of deep and total silence I like it to wrap around me like a rich velvet cloak heavy and comforting filling me with calm and peace oh, I like to withdraw into stillness and drown in waves of quietness but, I know beyond my hushed realm there is the roar of life and I need only step into it to break the spell oh, I need this lull so that my mind can speak for it is when utterly alone and apart that I can hear the whispering and all the cobwebs in the corridors of my mind can be swept away ____________________ June 14, 2021 Poetry/Verse/quietus Copyright Protected, ID 06-1363-396-14 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (Jun 15) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/15/2021 First Place

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Date: 6/15/2021 11:59:00 PM
What a majestic write! This poem resonates well with me.Breathtaking!Congratulations on your win in Brian’s contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/16/2021 6:51:00 AM
JCB, thank you for the lovely comment, compliment and the congratulations, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 6/14/2021 6:29:00 PM
Take us with you!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/15/2021 6:23:00 AM
Seeker, thank you for visiting and commenting, lol, you just need to turn all noise off to find the silence, peace _Constance
Date: 6/14/2021 4:38:00 PM
The world could use a little more silence. Wonderful poem. Makes a person think about what is important. have a great dayH
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Constance La France
Date: 6/15/2021 6:24:00 AM
David, thank you for the comment on my poem, I agree there is too much noise in the world, peace _Constance

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