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Quietly Stalked

Silent for the moment, it sits waiting, looming in the corner, one eye gleaming. Other occupants of the room cower. The classics stifle sneezes as their dusty pages flutter with fear. The Bible hugs the lower shelf of the table, protected by its own nonentity and irrelevance. The monster watches. One small movement will alert it. My impotent pen drops and rolls to its favorite hiding place. My groping finger lures the lurking beast to action. In helpless fascination I stare as the creature calls for reinforcements. They're coming in by twos and threes. I recognize war and pestilence as lewdness and vulgarity quickly follow. I try to calm the ogre when the room becomes crowded with rudeness, crudeness and indecency. Horror and fear filter in pushed by murder and mayhem. I frantically search for old familiar friends. Manners and kindness have been over come by the brutish force of the invaders. No longer in charge of my own living room, I almost succumb to the subtle enticement of the demon in Pandora's box, posing as a simple source of entertainment. Sanity stirs, causing one faint flick of my finger. The serpent crawls back into his lair to sulk and formulate plans for another invasion of my peace and quiet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/8/2014 11:10:00 PM
Incredible story and loved the angle you attacked this from...Congrats Joyce!
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:59:00 PM
Superb write Joyce! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:42:00 AM
Beautifully penned,Joyce.Congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:07:00 AM
VERY imaginative,my dear lady. congrats for your awesome win.
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:49:00 PM
Love this, Joyce. Great win in Charlotte's contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/7/2014 10:22:00 AM
You labeled this poem imagism.......which is exactly what it excels in........just simply wonderful descriptions, dear Joyce!
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations... love Linda
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Date: 8/7/2014 4:37:00 AM
joyce, this is a fantastic write from you, I had no idea this poem was yours! oh the metaphor...and "the classics stifle sneezes/as their dusty pages/flutter with fear" how did you come up with that? great stuff, unsettling...congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor with two poems and the best to you in the finals . I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 10:53:00 PM
Dear Joyce, Congratulations on both your entries making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:13:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/21/2009 12:40:00 AM
Congrats on your first round contest success Joyce.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:23:00 PM
Dear Joyce, Congratulations on having two poems make it through to the second round of the competition. Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:49:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 6/13/2009 3:44:00 AM
Smile~Yes, we must watch out for those demons of contemporaries designs...."You Are An Absolutely creative and amazing writer dear lady!!!:):)~And "You" can write so fluently and vividly within "Your" wonderful image filled creations~"I Love Your Magical Writing Joyce~Always Have~Always Shall!!!":):)~And, its been nice visiting "You" again~"With Love & Warmth To 'You & Your Loves Always,' John!!"~Bye Precious Lady ~
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Date: 6/11/2009 8:45:00 PM
Joyce, sounds like a vivid invasion of your creative writing! nice! Jim
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Date: 6/11/2009 3:15:00 PM
Veryyyyyyy Creep-ish like But Amasingly Done
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Date: 6/9/2009 5:31:00 PM
The invaders may have crawled back into their lair, but there's always another day for them to intrude on your peace and quiet. This was a compelling story with much food for thought, Joyce! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/8/2009 5:56:00 AM
My goodness Joyce, that is one frightening imagination. I thought it was going to be a nightmare. Wow, pretty creepy and well written. Love, Shar
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