Quiet Land

On quiet land I stood Observing all I could Watching birds fly by Flirting in the sky Then, I took my walk Seeking words to talk On a quiet path nearby With each step I would try Knowing what I was hoping to find On my way out of feeling blind Step by step quietly The clouds drifted by me silently While the sun played hide and seek Shining hope with every peek It would be easy to say a waste of time to try Then, suddenly you appeared with all reasons why I took this walk, with instincts in hand I found my valentine standing to take my hand My friend, my lover, forever to be Waited for me patiently Heidi Sands 1/26/18 Placed 2nd in the Premiere Romantic Valentine Contest.

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/15/2018 9:55:00 PM

So romantic and charming, and what a wonderful love story! Blessings and congrats on this winning gem, Heidi - love it, Friend! :-) <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/17/2018 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Gregory :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/4/2018 5:28:00 PM

Finding love in the quiet land! Congratulations, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2018 5:31:00 PM

Thank you Kim :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/3/2018 10:16:00 PM

Congratulations Heidi, so well deserved xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2018 4:32:00 AM

Thank you so much Mike :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/3/2018 3:15:00 PM

Congrats Heidi on your well deserved top win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2018 6:18:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/3/2018 2:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your heartwarming podium second placement Heidi! It stirs the heart! : )

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2018 6:18:00 PM

Thank you very much Connie :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/3/2018 2:26:00 PM

A wonderful poem, Heidi. Congrats on your 2nd Place podium placement. Hugs, Sandra

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2018 6:18:00 PM

Thank you Sandra :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2018 2:06:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 2st place in the contest, Heidi - Lovely Valentine poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2018 6:18:00 PM

Thank you very much Anne - Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 2/3/2018 9:46:00 AM

Congrats on your win Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2018 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/3/2018 9:21:00 AM

Lovely penning Heidi! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2018 9:29:00 AM

Thank you very much Maureen! Have a nice day :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/29/2018 9:31:00 AM

So romantic, Heidi and so important to trust our instincts which are more that what we think they are, I believe. Good Luck in the contest xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/29/2018 10:13:00 AM

Thanks again Mike. Yes, we must trust our instincts. I appreciate your support. :)

Roy Pett

Date: 1/28/2018 1:40:00 PM

This is a pleasure to read Heidi so well written, G L in contest. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/28/2018 1:49:00 PM

Hi Roy. Thank you :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/28/2018 11:22:00 AM

A delightful journey filled with contemplation & expectation...lovely!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/28/2018 11:23:00 AM

Thank you James. I appreciate your support :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 1/28/2018 11:18:00 AM

Beautifully said

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/28/2018 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Mike :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/27/2018 6:10:00 PM

So very sweet, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2018 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Sunlite :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/27/2018 6:47:00 AM

A sweet, romantic poem..you set the scene well for arrival of valentine.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2018 7:12:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)

Gary Smith

Date: 1/27/2018 5:53:00 AM

A lovely sweet poem Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2018 7:12:00 AM

Thank you Gary :)

Silent One

Date: 1/26/2018 5:04:00 PM

Very romantic, some great lines in this valentine write...

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2018 5:08:00 PM

Thank you Silent One :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/26/2018 4:29:00 PM

A peaceful sweet little poem...A Valentine of fate...Nice one Heidi...All the best

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2018 4:56:00 PM

Thank you Arturo :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/26/2018 4:13:00 PM

A lovely and romantic write Heidi..best wishes...

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2018 4:56:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/26/2018 3:54:00 PM

Very pretty and soooooooo sweet. I enjoyed the read very much. Blessings ... CayCay

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2018 4:05:00 PM

Thank you so much CayCay. I am happy you enjoyed it :)