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(“Franklin Mountains,” image courtesy of flicker.com)

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For 20 years, I lived outside El Paso, Texas, home of the Chihuahuan Desert and the Franklin Mountains. During my daily morning commute, I drove past the mountain range often thinking, ‘If the earth had a pulse it surely rose through the mountains, creating their bold silhouette.’ To my eye, their peaks were the green line of a doctor's graph. I saw those rocks at dawn, those slopes that gave home to so much life—a foundation for low-lying trees and shrubs and colorful cacti. The blue sky atop the mountains with their quiet clouds drifting by calmed me.
quiet clouds above calmly passing by a sea of blue and white that pleases the eye mountains in the distance sit still in yellow light the sun ahead constantly coloring every sight never again will I ever be here at this very moment let us not fear for this is where the mind is content this is where my soul leaves its print

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Date: 1/28/2024 7:05:00 AM
The contrast so beautiful dear friend. Your description is spot on! My favorite lines: "never again will I ever be here at this very moment let us not fear". Have a great Texas day - SUN for a change! Linda :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/28/2024 4:18:00 PM
thank you for your lovely comments, Linda. That line is my favorite, too. Had a great Texas day...warming up a bit..and sunshine...hooray! hugs, Sara
Date: 1/27/2024 5:31:00 PM
A wonderful poem of peace and tranquility. 'mountains in the distance sit still in yellow light' is a fantastic description of the beloved mountains.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/28/2024 4:20:00 AM
thanks, Jerry, for your visit and complimentary words...appreciate you...have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 1/27/2024 12:46:00 PM
My dear friend, your poem is exquisitely composed. It eloquently captures the essence and magnificence of the natural world. The vivid imagery you employ effortlessly transports me into a state of profound appreciation and contemplation. Your poet's note is equally captivating, adding an extra layer of beauty to your work. I am truly enamored by your artistry, dear friend. I send you my sincerest and warmest regards.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/27/2024 4:11:00 PM
thank you, Sotto. You are most kind with your complimentary words. I'm grateful my poem transported you into contemplative appreciation of the mountains and clouds. I often miss those mountains and the simplicity of the desert. Thanks for your warm regards...I appreciate your sincerity. Have a pleasant evening, hugs from your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 1/27/2024 12:19:00 PM
I can relate being in Phoenix except the mountians are barren. Another thing we fall in love with is nature. And your discription shows the love of it. And also the place and the name gives it perspective. Which could serve as an invitation.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/27/2024 4:12:00 PM
thanks for your well-written comments. Thanks for appreciating my descriptive words and perspective. Grateful for your visit today, Sara
Date: 1/27/2024 10:15:00 AM
This is so nice Sara. I love the mountains and always enjoy the sky too. What you have experienced and written about is beautiful. Hugs :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/27/2024 4:13:00 PM
awww, thank you, Heidi. I miss the Franklin Mountains but not the frequent dust storms. Thanks for dropping by, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/27/2024 8:42:00 AM
Dear Sara, soulful poetess, I adore your poem's expressive appreciation of the beauty and grandeur of Nature. Your vivid imagery brings my imagination into the moment of contentment with you, in mindful awe of natural beauty, realization and gratitude. I love your poet's note too. So beautiful, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/27/2024 8:23:00 AM
This beautiful poem of serenity brings to my mind how mountains and clouds captivate those around them. Our American deserts are enchanting and mystical.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/27/2024 4:14:00 PM
thanks for dropping by, Hilda. I agree...American deserts are enchanting with their vivid contrasts and simplicity. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 1/27/2024 6:27:00 AM
I love how your poem paints a serene tableau of nature's beauty, inviting readers to immerse themselves in the stillness of the present moment. Through its vivid imagery and reflective tone, the poem celebrates the simple joys found in the natural world.. In its simplicity and sincerity, the poem serves as a gentle reminder to pause, to breathe, and to fully embrace the present moment. It is a testament to the enduring power of nature to soothe the spirit and awaken a sense of wonder and awe..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/27/2024 4:15:00 PM
thank you, Silent One, for your in-depth comments. You're right, I wanted to celebrate the simplicity of the desert and the mountains at its foundation. While living in the desert, I learned the power of simplicity and living in the moment. I appreciate you and your visit. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

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