Quick and the Dead

There once a dare devil named Dan
smugly swung with only one hand
	forgot and let go
	of the rope in tow
sank in a thick pool of quicksand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wells Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 7:56 AM
I love the silly humor of this piece. Well-written limericks always brighten the day.
Fowler Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:58 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed this Thomas. Yes, true limericks are really fun and bring a smile. Thanks for the visit! :)
Anaya Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Great title Linda! Lol, Dan the man in the quicksand! Love it `I Am laughing Ps. do you prefer Alice or Linda?
Fowler Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 2:04 PM
A name is just another label after all, yes?
Anaya Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Ah, Awe
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 3:00 PM
Thank you Anaya! I answer to either. People typically call me Linda because it's my first given name but I am called Alice by many. I asked to be called Alice in school at one time, a long time ago (a surprise to my family-Ha!-always the enigma, I was/am). :)
Rose  Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 4:05 AM
THAT POOR DEVIL, LOL Nice one Alice
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Good morning Vie. LOL Glad you got a smile this morning. :) Alice
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 5:12 PM
Poor Dan! Sounds like the daredevil in him came to a bad end. How'd he lose his other hand, feeding a crocodile?! Funny but a bit sad! Glad it's just your funny pen and not an obituary!!
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Ha! It's just a limerick...sometimes bawdy, most times silly, hopefully always fun! Thanks for the visit Betty Jo. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 11:23 PM
May he rest in peace, poor fellow.
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 7:17 AM
Hello Victor. Guess he got too brash. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 12:05 PM
Yes, the deadly quicksand…dun dun dun! The daredevils usually die in a bizarre way! Very funny!
Fowler Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Thank you Kim. They do, don't they!
Gorelick Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Too bad, he was such a nice guy too! Just kidding, Linda, great limerick, Robert
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