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Anacreontic couplets are a form of poetry named after the ancient Greek poet Anacreon. These couplets typically focus on themes of love, beauty, and the joys of wine. They are characterized by their light and celebratory nature.

The Anacreontic Ode is proof that an ode need not be long and lofty. The Greek poet Anacreon often wrote odes in praise of pleasure and drink, a Dithyramb or Skolion. Often the odes were made up of 7 syllable, rhymed couplets known as Anacreontic couplets. 

The Anacreontic couplet is:
stanzaic, written in any number of couplets,
preferably short. The Anacreontic Ode is often made up of a series of Anacreontic couplets.
syllabic, 7 syllables for each line.
rhymed. aa bb etc.
composed to celebrate the joys of drinking and love making

Among wild weeds a rose blooms, perfumed with elixir fumes. Butterflies visit with glee, sharing nectar with the bee. Was ever a petal born? That would leave beloveds torn, not from its shard like sharp thorn, but its sweet splendour in morn. If it could be evergreen, in my garden it'd be queen.

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Date: 12/28/2023 7:09:00 AM
Lovely running on nice flow enchanting reader. Blessings.
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Date: 12/18/2023 9:40:00 PM
Silent One, your concise, vividly descriptive poem conveys a love of and appreciation for nature. Janice
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Date: 12/18/2023 8:32:00 PM
So sweet, a rose bloom among weeds with its soft perfume and silken petals. No doubt it will be the queen of any garden. Your lines run so smooth with easy flow. Staying within the constraints of seven syllables and rhyming, you have composed a beautiful poem, dear Silent one.
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Date: 12/18/2023 2:00:00 AM
7 syllables to each line, all sounds too complicated to me. But you do so well with all these forms. Love it... hugs
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Date: 12/17/2023 8:42:00 PM
An engaging form, I am clueless, just unaware of its varieties, it is compelling, Silent One, thank you. My dawning was engrossed with a piece, and now I anticipate my eve will bear out a similar yawning. Cheers to that. Aloha, William
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Date: 12/17/2023 6:56:00 PM
Awesome poem. I especially love the last ten lines.
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Date: 12/17/2023 5:36:00 PM
Lovely, lovely written Silent, I love the end rhymes. My favourite lines is "Was ever a petal born that would leave beloved torn?" I feel there's pain to every beauty, invisible thorns waiting to sting at the touch of the attraction.
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Date: 12/17/2023 3:36:00 AM
it's an interesting form, and this is an effective rendering of it - i particularly like the opening couplet..appreciate your kind comment on my sonnet
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Date: 12/17/2023 3:09:00 AM
Roses are beautiful my friend and are refereed to mostly when writing of love, wine, women or song. A heart warming poem, did not know of this form of poetry or the poet but being half Greek I feel I must now explore and find his work. I truly enjoyed this poem Silent One, the perfume and sweet splendour in the morn, totally charming and enticing is a rose, when poetically expressed only as you can. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 12/17/2023 2:10:00 AM
don't know this poetical form, but the result is outstanding, enjoyed a lot poet
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Date: 12/16/2023 9:55:00 PM
A splendid example of Anacreontic Couplets or ode, Silent One. I'm going to give this a try one of these days. As always, I enjoyed reading your poetry, my friend. I learn something new with each poem I read. Thank you. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 12/16/2023 8:05:00 PM
strong flow and movement, intertwined with memorable visuals - nice
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Date: 12/16/2023 5:27:00 PM
The beautiful rose, which frequently generates excitement, is excellently depicted here, Silent One. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, which is a fave. :)
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Date: 12/16/2023 4:10:00 PM
Reads like a good contender if for a contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 12/16/2023 11:32:00 AM
- A lovely poem, S.O. ... you make all forms excellent ... I'm bad at rhyming in English :) - (sorry I don't commets often .... my PC "lives its own life" ... difficult to use ... I need a new one) - hugs
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