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Puttin On the Ritz

Had an invite to a ball in Lake Tahoe
at the Ritz Carlton what a surprise.
To celebrate in true old fashioned style
opened a door couldn’t believe my eyes

The ballroom was all of a glitter
with walls of silk and panels of wood
Had brought in chandeliers shining like diamonds
the backdrop of Martis Valley looking good.

One whole wall was made of glass
showing a view nearly too much to bare.
I heard the sound of more guests
turned round, I couldn’t help but stare.

Here were ladies dressed in their finery
the gents in tuxedos and white starched shirts.
They gracefully walked to their tables
whilst the band tuned up ready to start.

What a night of pleasure, 
we waltzed ‘til our feet were sore
Then we gathered the strength for a foxtrot,
we danced and danced even more.

Fireworks were set off in the gardens
Spiralling high in the night air
The sparkle of these were out dimmed
By the light in the eyes of folks here.

What a way to remember the old days
all dressed up, in a ballroom like this,
The last waltz is played, looked around me
We all had enjoyed Puttin on the Ritz.

Penned by Seren Roberts
On August 15th 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/12/2015 8:19:00 PM
And a fun time was had by all. It is nice to be able to forget the world and its troubles once in a while. Great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/10/2015 11:00:00 PM
Exquisite write Seren! Congrats on a wonderful win!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/11/2015 1:55:00 AM
Thank you so much ....Seren
Date: 9/10/2015 4:16:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2015 6:23:00 PM
thanks Jan...Seren
Date: 9/10/2015 1:20:00 PM
Seren, Congrats on your "Puttin On The Ritz WIN.." SKAT
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2015 6:24:00 PM
thank you Skat
Date: 9/10/2015 10:48:00 AM
Thank you for being in my contest
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Date: 9/10/2015 6:24:00 PM
thank you for placing me Judy..Seren
Date: 8/23/2015 8:47:00 AM
Brought us back to an enchanting time. Good luck in the contest!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Carol....Seren
Date: 8/17/2015 5:09:00 PM
Seren, this is just wonderful for the contest A7 , best of luck in the contest ... I am sending you a soup mail in a moment
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2015 12:44:00 AM
Thanks Broken Wings....Seren
Date: 8/15/2015 7:24:00 PM
simply charming imagery Seren good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2015 12:45:00 AM
Jan thanks for your comment...Seren

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