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Push Past the Pain - Friendship

"Let the pain fall to the side as your spirits rise on high and in hope may your love reside." Pain my only friend, why thou betray with thy night, thy holy night slumber waits a weary chest beheld another upon final rest Fear bygone is thou fate saddled on nerves gone astray beseech me only to promise thou shall look away Pain my dearest friend I cast Ye to the winds where angels fly up high to carry me home Love I beg of thee enter into thy wilted heart pump pleasure in pearls of light past an aged unpleasant friend Hope in splendor shine whole in hands of tender lay guided droplets vision's ray until we shall be one again

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Date: 3/27/2017 12:26:00 PM
Excellent Pen :-) I'm not usually a fan of 'olde' english but it is perfect for this poem Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/27/2017 12:03:00 AM
The olde language gives your words much depth, almost feels like a calming personal prayer to another so they know they are never alone. A remarkable write Tim, to soothe, giving peace and hope...an incredible gift. a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/25/2017 3:58:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. Allow me to simply say I found this beautiful and so touching. Your words reach the heart. I loved the quiet tone and voice. Yes, may splendor shine and everything whole. What a wonderful thought. This was an honor to read this morning. Well done in its entriety.
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Date: 3/25/2017 12:59:00 AM
A marvelous piece of poetry, Tim! This is really up there mate! Well done.
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Date: 3/24/2017 10:28:00 PM
You have the gift of always writing beautiful poetry, this my friends rises above even that, splendid! and a fav!
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Date: 3/24/2017 1:57:00 PM
- Touching and deep, lovely written Tim - We must never lose hope, even in pain - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2017 1:56:00 PM
I read this earlier and was writing a comment when the site went down, at least it did for me. This is beautiful Tim. The olde world feel just enhances the message in this.
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Date: 3/24/2017 1:14:00 PM
Beautifully written Tim. I love the ending. :)
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Date: 3/24/2017 12:43:00 PM
Oh Tim this is indeed a beautiful serene poem...It carries a certain karma of peace.
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Date: 3/24/2017 12:32:00 PM
This is really so beautiful Tim, it gives a feeling of peace, and hope indeed. Thank you :)
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