Pure Pleasure

when hearts beat together cozy home's pure pleasure change the tempo, however love-nest's bereft of feathers

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Karen Jones

Date: 6/15/2025 2:03:00 PM

Yep! So witty you are! Keep them coming Gershon!

Mike Bayles

Date: 6/15/2025 8:18:00 AM

I like this poem, Gershon. So much said in four lines. Thanks for the interesting comment on my poem.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/14/2025 12:40:00 PM

Aint that the truth Gershon. Well said.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2025 9:07:00 PM

Well- commented-on, Oliver. Wink-wink, Gershon

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/14/2025 9:18:00 AM

Yep, when relationships go sour...it is hell! Feathers in the air, but not a pile for comfort.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2025 9:04:00 PM

Hell in a handbasket...

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/14/2025 8:41:00 AM

Good one Gershon. No ruffling feathers lol :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2025 9:01:00 PM

Nope. Not for me. I just whistle a happy tune. ~ gw

John Lawless

Date: 6/14/2025 5:46:00 AM

well then stop ruffling the feathers...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2025 9:00:00 PM

R-r-r-r-ruffles have r-r-r-r-r-idges, whatever that means in this context...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/13/2025 7:04:00 PM

Funny how that happens! sometimes feathers are flying! Sometimes here we can laugh by turning the stupid moment of the argument into humor…