Pure Pleasure

     when hearts beat together
         cozy home's pure pleasure

      change the tempo, however
         love-nest's bereft of feathers
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Jones Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 2:03 PM
Yep! So witty you are! Keep them coming Gershon!
Bayles Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 8:18 AM
I like this poem, Gershon. So much said in four lines. Thanks for the interesting comment on my poem.
Mckeithan Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 12:40 PM
Aint that the truth Gershon. Well said.
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:07 PM
Well- commented-on, Oliver. Wink-wink, Gershon
DiMino Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:18 AM
Yep, when relationships go sour...it is hell! Feathers in the air, but not a pile for comfort.
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Hell in a handbasket...
Sands Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Good one Gershon. No ruffling feathers lol :)
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:01 PM
Nope. Not for me. I just whistle a happy tune. ~ gw
Lawless Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 5:46 AM
well then stop ruffling the feathers...
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:00 PM
R-r-r-r-ruffles have r-r-r-r-r-idges, whatever that means in this context...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Funny how that happens! sometimes feathers are flying! Sometimes here we can laugh by turning the stupid moment of the argument into humor…
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