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Pure Bliss

I am escaping, running away from life. Capturing the wind, I am going to fly. Cutting through all that binds me with a knife. Freeing myself, I rise into the endless sky. I am soaring, I feel weightless, so free I left all trials, tribulations and such below. I am in awe, this is really happening to me. I am ready, I want to let down, and let go. The colors that I see are vivid and true, like nothing that I have ever seen. The pinks, the purples, silvers, and blue. Looking down, the sea is a clear green. I am feeling such a sense of pure bliss. I don't ever want to again touch the ground. Surfing the wind, I say goodbye, blowing a kiss. Look into the sky, you may see me, I'll be around.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/19/2019 8:19:00 AM
Sky surfing you made us feel as though we were with you, enjoyed the ride of freedom!
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 9/21/2019 10:46:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed the ride. Thank you John.
Date: 4/1/2019 11:41:00 AM
Hello Sandra, this is pure bliss. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 4/1/2019 12:11:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene for your lovely comment. So glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/2/2019 11:02:00 AM
All around...Nice write...A vivid ride...All the best
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/2/2019 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo, my best to you, also.

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