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Puppy Love Vs True Love

Teenagers on the school bus, holding sweaty hands tight, we get off at the next stop, carrying my books home uphill, Go on first date which is a thrill, roller skating round till eleven thirty, walking home to meet the curfew, kissing me despite my pimples, Found out it was just infatuation, saw you in hall with a new girl, holding hands just like us, knowing it was just puppy love, Years later in a book shop, bumped into a man with a kind face, found out we were the same age, with many things in common, Our first year of marriage we ate a lot of Ramen, we were poor but had ambitious stamina, having both blessings and hardships over the years, mature love endures through the laughter and tears. 3-25-17

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Date: 4/14/2017 4:26:00 PM
Masterful write, Cheryl!Touched the right cords!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/14/2017 4:53:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Sara! Much appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 4/13/2017 10:58:00 PM
Cheryl,congratulations on your win. I want to thank you for entering my contest. May you have Blessed weekend… ~*
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/14/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much for placing me as one of your winners Eve; was a very nice surprise!~Blessings back~Che :)
Date: 3/30/2017 1:24:00 PM
A fantastic trip you took us on, Cheryl. This was such a joyful poem to read. It brought back so many memories of short lived love, but love nonetheless. And of course the enduring love which lasts a lifetime. Bravo, on being such a courageous Captain of the heart. Beautiful poem. Love and hugs, my dear friend.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/30/2017 6:54:00 PM
Thanks very much for very kind comment and visit Freddie!~ Love and hugs back~Che :)
Date: 3/28/2017 7:23:00 AM
A very beautiful write from the heart my friend
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/28/2017 7:29:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike!~Che :)
Date: 3/27/2017 1:10:00 PM
This poetic trip though the heart is, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. Emile.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/27/2017 8:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for very kind comment and visit Emile!~Che :)
Date: 3/26/2017 3:51:00 PM
Right on, Cheryl. : ) Always are some tears along the way, but love can get through. I positively cringe when I think of some things in my younger life, but have ended up in a good place.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/26/2017 9:27:00 PM
Glad to hear you ended up in a good place Doug; thanks so much for your very kind comment and visit!~Che :)

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